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| "Stand" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 12:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
nicely written. if i didn't know the heartache and the joys of certain choices, if i had to do them over again... that is a situation i wish never to be in, not that i would have avoided making stupid self destructive decisions but that i never gave a second thought to and not knowing the outcome i would have still done it all. i like kagome's attitude and wisdom... wisdom, something i had very little of when i was her age and well beyond. . . lovely story ~ thank you, ginny
| Reviewed By: decemberangel16 On: August 16, 2007 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love the story.good job!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... great work... good job... keep it up...
| Reviewed By: ladygriddlebone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. I liked it a lot. I think probably the only thing that could be better would be if it was longer in comparison to the song (more story between the song bits, etc.), but at the same time, I did really like how the story and the lyrics worked together and blended into one continuous story rather than being totally split apart. Kagome's feelings seemed very realistic to me, as well as her decision to return to the feudal era in the end. Good job!
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