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| "Future Beginnings" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: Nanimochan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your form of writing is very inspirational. I really love the creativity here and I can't wait until you update again. The flow is really good and it's so easy for me to get sucked in. Though I am a little nervous about the "If we come back." part but then that makes me want to read this more. So pretty please update soon. Manda
| Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey hey hey! Thats the end???? :O Please please right either more on a sequile please.
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 16:46 CST
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what is it about good stories that are wonderfully written, i don't want to see them end? this is one of them. =/ . . . ~it's been a magnificent journey and my wish for many more, ginny
| Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 16:30 CST
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please! oh, please! don't let this really be the end! it feels like its just getting started...i mean, Sesshoumaru did say they just disappeared from the feudal era! so, we need to see where they disappeared to...right? i hope so! but even if that is the end, it's a very good read.
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 16:22 CST
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Excellent, he has all forms! And he likes her form, "he told her so, twice". Oh I just bet he did! Quite a lot happened to our hanyou this trip, eh? Saw a new land, learned a new language, gained new friends, made up with his brother, became a leader, AND got the girl! Whew, that tired me out, I can just imagine his dizziness at it all. This was a wonderful, wonderful story, most excellently written. Perfect characterization, the best blend of tension and humour, and a happy ending. I am happy, yep, yep. Can't wait to see what else you write!
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 16:53 CST
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if one thinks about it he already partially transforms when he's traveling in the treetops when he's almost weightless as he jumps from narrow branches... good chapter, good story, gifted and talented author. ~ a pleasure, ginny
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 15:58 CST
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I am so loving this story! It just gets better and better. So, IY is now a spirit form.... hope he can change back! What new adventures (trouble) will this bring? Can't wait to see!
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 06:34 CST
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red tossle cap, long white hair, red outfit... santa clause *giggles* sword, no beard, thin, yellow eyes, bare feet, claws... i can see a little kid making that assumption. . . kagome's gonna osuwari him for messing up the woods behind peter's place! . . . i love the little sprinklings of humor even in the serious moments. ~ a pleasure, ginny
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 17:25 CST
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Santa! LadyCash is rolling... Yep, yep, yep, he's gonna make a fine leader in this new world, love his maturity and planning. This IY that you have created, is near perfect, IMO. Very well done. Spirit form? Now that could be interesting! Not only does he grow in power (at such an age, too!) but he gets a new form(s)? Too cool. This just gets better and better!
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 00:52 CST
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i just got done reading this so far and i don't understand why there are so few reviews. this piece is intriguing, entertaining, full of description and humor. it's eloquently written. there have been so many humorous scenes, yasha following kagome from the shrine to america was so richly descriptive and oh so funny and there are too many more to recount. . . it's interesting how you explain the youkai with the anastasie and native american beliefs, mythology and folklore along with the japanese. . . yes this story deserves more recognition. ~ a true pleasure, ginny
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 22:48 CST
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Please excuse me while I roll on the floor. "I did." he said proudly. Oh I'll bet he did! It's a never ending roller coaster ride with our hanyou, eh? So sweet and endearing, yet somehow always bringing trouble. But it surely does make for great reading!
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 22:35 CST
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Hmmmm....I knew the new youkai would come with trouble, but IY handled it so well. Very commanding, in control. I like him like this. Really enjoyed this chapter, very nice.
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 13:18 CST
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So, IY has his human night, in public. Didn't go to badly, I'd say. It's good his friends are taking this so well, makes things much easier. Didn't doubt for a minute that he'd be a whiz in class, with some hard work. There's nothiing stupid a/b our hanyou, not at all. Interesting that the youkai are fading away, and that just with 'wanting' they become 'real'. Hmmm, makes for an interesting future, but then, so does this whole story. Glad for the update!
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 16:47 CST
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Wow, IY is really growing up! I like it. Good to see he and K working together, still watching each others backs, and IY's circle of friends growing larger. Like how he feels he has to find them a place to live, he's really come a long way!
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 14:12 CDT
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Yep, gotta love them ears! Glad IY's finding his way, growing up, learning a/b K's world, and open to possibilities. His characterization is wonderful, I love this!
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