| "Gut Instincts" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: damocles7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2009 06:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm new to Bleach fic, having been a veteran reader of Ranma fic. I have just run across your works. Actually this is the first lot of Bleach fic I've read ever. So far I've read 8 of your works. Very well done. I'm slowly going through your work on this site as time allows. Looking forward to the rest of it. :) Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Inazagi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so freaking hot, AND original! I'm so damned jealous of you with your original and creative plotlines and the amazing writing techniques. Tutor me, sensei! Another amazing job, time to read another fic, I think! Anna xxx
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe a nicely made sequel. It was good to enjoy reading from an Ichigo perspective and trying to solve the mystery of the girl in his dreams. Nice to know that Rukia was actually the girl of his dream all along :-) Overall I liked the sequel and I must say the smut was...well very smutty indeed XD! A nice two parter and you did a wonderful job. Keep it up and I look forward to reading the rest of your stoires =)
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic! Its so awesome!
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So awesome! I love it! It so hot and steamy! Great job!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT! It was awesome! I love you're fic's. YOU'RE AWESOME!!!
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Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Let me tell you… when a guy has sex, he wants to remember every, single, minute detail about that night. Men don't like it when they can't remember having awesome sex with someone-especially if it's a girl they've wanted to have sex with for long, long, long, time." This has got to be one of the most sexy and romantic things Ichigo has ever said in a fanfic. :) I love the way you were able to clarify the issue of why Rukia's memory eraser worked -- but only temporarily. The whole scenario of Ichigo having sex dreams with a woman he can't see is so brilliant. Great work, this. I bow to your superior literary skills. :)
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Reviewed By: Silver Armada [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 15:10 CDT
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Amazing; I loved every minute of it. Also, wonderfully romantic. :3
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Reviewed By: DannilovesInu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 18:10 CDT
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Ah..Tituba, I have to say that I'm absolutely in love with your work. When I first found this site I was looking for Bleach fiction...and I have to say I was a little disappointed. But then I stumbled upon one of your stories and...*sigh* You completely and totally satisfy the romantic in me who has such high hopes for Rukia and Ichigo. Keep up the great work, can't wait for your next piece.
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Title: ne?
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 22:51 CDT
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just finished readin... well i cant deny that ur rili gud. nice!!!
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god i love your story the sex is so hot i love it thanks
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Title: Hiiii-YAH!!! @_@
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::Sniff sniff:: I wanted to be the first to review!! Oh well...Just when I was recovering from your latest update on 'Casual Friends' you added another story??? This was really a good follow up from the original story, and I'm really glad you wrote it. As for your reviews and the lack thereof, it's a shame that your readers will come and not leave a review; it only takes a second to do it. So I implore all readers to TRY to leave a review when you read a story, I know you're not required to do it but out of the respect of the writer, let them know how much you liked it. As for the content of the reviews you've received, I do want to give you some advice, from one writer to another. In this fanfiction world everyone is very critical, and when you read a review take it in, don't let it make you re-edit or redo what you've already done. Like for instance, the review about why Ichigo lost his memory and the thing about the kabob… in all honesty any story revolving around Ichigo and Rukia that speaks of romance is AU, so your story can be anyway you want it to do. Stop trying to validate why you written your material the way you did. Just take in the review, and let it be. If you don't, you're going to find yourself very unhappy with writing. You cannot please everyone in the fanfiction world; you're always going to write something wrong or use something in the story they may or may not agree with. As long as you're happy with it when you're finished typing, then it's good. In fact, it's damn superb. Keep writing, I really really love it. And please take no offense in what I tried to explain. gg
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the sequel..Please write more..I really love your writing
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