| "Yu-Gi-Oh GX Digi-Stars: Twilight Wars" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. But you never did put in a scene where Sartorius and the others viewed the video footage. Other than that nice chapter.
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, it's me! Good chapter! I've got a question to ask, will Jade embrace the darkness to fight agains the SOL members?
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Title: BEWK
Reviewed By: Blue-Eyes White Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well finally both Jordan and Jade make their debut in your awesome story good job man!^^ BEWK
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter
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Reviewed By: Matt (from ff.net) On: October 24, 2007 15:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
This has got to be the best of all your fics!! To mix all these animes and characters as well as you have is amazing. oh, just one thing tho, for taking Jordan (one of my fave characters from the other fics) MAKE SURE THE SOL DROWNS IN BLOOD!! Other than that, great fic, what else can I say?
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 10:51 CDT
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OH MY FREAKING GOD!!!! THAT WAS FANTASTIC GALLANTMON!!!! No seriously I loved it but my favorite part was when Zane saw Hikari and the ahem, images that ran through his mind I thought I'd die from laughing lol. Hey I've got a question. Would it be possible for Rika to remain with Tyranno in this story? Just y'know . . . I don't like to see one of my fave characters lonely. T.T lol but if I can tinker it (and I certainly can) I approve of how you'd like to use my ideas and all I ask is that Takara and Rika become either a Dark Jewel Defender or a Jewel Defender y'know? lol I'll try and get an update out soon but I'm not too sure when I'll be able to. It'll probably be after a long hiatus, but just keep your eyes open mkay?
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Title: You lied to me
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey you said that Jade and Jordan weren't going to be in this story. Also hook Takuya up with Zoe.
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 13:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
You still got some grammar mistakes, like the 'expect' thing, when excluding things like in one of the quotes: For tonight, Sakura and Hinata insisted that they would be the ones to watch over the dorms for the night and not wanting to make an argument over it, the rest of our heroes and heroines, 'expect' for Yusuke, who didn't participate at all in the discussion, agreed with Hinata watching over the Slifer Red dorm and Sakura watching over the Ra Yellow dorms. It's supposed to be: For tonight, Sakura and Hinata insisted that they would be the ones to watch over the dorms for the night and not wanting to make an argument over it, the rest of our heroes and heroines, 'except' for Yusuke, who didn't participate at all in the discussion, agreed with Hinata watching over the Slifer Red dorm and Sakura watching over the Ra Yellow dorms. Other than that, you did a good job!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!! Plz Update It Soon!!:)
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chapter. I like it. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing 'White Bastion' and Sartorius finging out that Naruto and Bastion are cousins.
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Title: Awesome chapter!
Reviewed By: Blue-Eyes White Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well so far i've read 4 chapters and i gotta say man,this fic totally rocks,good job. BEWK
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Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT LAST CHAPTER WAS FREAKING AWESOME GALLANTMON you really need to hurry and get saturn back and rini in the story also when are u going to reveal kari's and jadnes silver milleniun connection
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Reviewed By: laidler123 On: October 08, 2007 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, sweet story. but when are you going to reveal davis's dark past or his connection to the silver millenium for that matter?
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 10:55 CDT
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ABSOTIVLY POSILUTELY FREAKING INCREDIBLE GALLANTMON!!!!!!!! I'm not even kidding I was on the edge of my seat for the whole time (that and wondering what Rika would do to see under Kakashi's mask . . . hmm . . .) but I'm thankful for your kind words about my story and now I've got some to give you as well. The plot is flowing nicely, as are the duel scenes, and to be honest I'm left with a feeling of amazement and the large desire to write, though I dunno when I'll be able to update again . . . But it was excellent as always and I can't wait to see you next time!
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Title: Must get Hellfire Deck
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 01:11 CDT
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(Salivates like Homer Simpson at an all you can eat buffee) Must get Hellfire Deck. Also I have to say that I do not envy Dimitri or Atticus. Heh imagine if Timeaus combined with Chaos Neos.
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