| "Yu-Gi-Oh GX Digi-Stars: Twilight Wars" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Title: Got to rush this
Reviewed By: matn90 aka Dark Side of the Moon On: February 14, 2008 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Got to rush this since I hav to go to my SAT study class! GREAT BATTLE! LIKE CLASH OF THE TITANS ANIME STYLE! See more soon I hope! Later!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: Matt(from ff.net) On: February 06, 2008 14:23 CST
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This was the best big battle yet!! With Sartorius out the SOL is pretty much neutered..I LOVE IT! I can't wait to see who the new dark side enemies are, especially the new ninja (something tells me it's not Orochimaru). Get the next part out fast!
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 00:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Though I have a few things to ask or say. On the So'unga's sheath shouldn't it go across Naruto's back since it is so big? Also on the Jutsu you don't have to put Ninja Art before the name of the jutsu. Also how about Naruto takes down Crowler and Bonaparte somewhere down the line. Plus perhaps the Kyubi could come before Naruto to explain the Kyubi's history with the LoD. Also you never answered my on the Amaterasu. Plus if you do have Itachi show up as a good guy the explanation you could give is that he was under the control of Madara Uchiha.
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Title: Whoa!
Reviewed By: Blue-Eyes White Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this was the best chapter yet,and the fighting scenes we're awesome!Good job!Update soon!^^ BEWK
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good chapter! Hope you update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 20:04 CST
Comment/Review:
OH MI FREAKINOD THAT WAS SO AMAZING!!!! No seriously, it was well worth the wait, it was amazing and awesome and I can't wait for more already!!!!! So good and incredible!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: crimsonskydeath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome Gallantmon not only is your chapter great but you are the only writer I know who has 1 or mor fics at or over 1,000,000 words!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 02:29 CST
Comment/Review:
I am guessing that Naruto will get So'unga back during the fight with the LoD next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 09:17 CST
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oh wowiee wow wow!!!!! No seriously, I'm freaking in awe right now Gallantmon!!! that chappie was amazing, and I love the way you captured Melissa, Nyoko, and Erin . . . especially as far as Erin losing control. It was well written and my heart was in my throat at the end, I could hardly believe it!!!!! It was so well written and well thought out . . . absolutely gorgeous. Hoping for more ASAP!!!! Oh, and keep an eye out for a new chappie of the Treasured Era either tomorrow or Friday okay?
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Reviewed By: avatoa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 23:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Now when you say "Shinobi Pirate Crew" does that mean you are bringing One Piece into this thing or what? Because I would definitely like to see Luffy wailing on the Light of Destruction with his Devil Fruit powers.
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Title: Great Work!!!!!
Reviewed By: Crossoverlover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I liked the chapter. I did wonder if Davis is ruling Egypt in the future with Kari, where are Alexis and Jaden ruling at? I can't wait to see what you do next keep up the great work. I am getting more ideas for my story from reading this and your other story. I am still stuck on the Darien duel and I totally forgot what you told me about his cards I choose to use. Anyway, I look forward to the next update.
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Title: Good Chapter
Reviewed By: Blue-Eyes White Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter so far man,keep up the good work.^^ BEWK
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!!
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 18:13 CST
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Nice chapter, however, can you update this story next week, instead of 'Darkness Moon', because I want to see Kagome's reaction to what she's been doing to Inuyasha and the REAL truth about what happened between Inuyasha and Kikyo.
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