| "Rumours of a shadow fox" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: black fox dawn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 23:56 CDT
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and personally i think the sakura and akamaru thing would be a blast.
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Reviewed By: black fox dawn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i have to say that this is a different look on things. but it would be better IF YOU WOULD UPDATE IT!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MasterBrattan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 16:28 CDT
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pass this on to spiritwolf30: JohnnyG, the author of Ice Princess of Konoha has decided to give up fanficdom for good, to be with his family and to reascess his Christian values, but he is passing it on to someone else, don't know who yet.
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Reviewed By: MasterBrattan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 16:24 CDT
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you are so cruel for even suggesting that sakura be married to akamaru. what did akamaru ever do to you in the first place. other than that bit, this is good.
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Reviewed By: Incalu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how do i make it so that i should get an email whenever u update cuz that would be great.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 00:12 CDT
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That was an ok chapter really short and I mean short but still ok sorry to complain but with the size of that chapter you could have atleast 2 chapter posted in a week and your right they need to write more stories where Naruto is paired up with these women Kurenai,Anko,Temari,Tenten,Shizue,Tsunade,Hanabi and Hana hell there was a story where Naruto was paired up with Hana but the author asked for ppl to send him or her a lemon with so it could be added to the story but then all of a sudden the author just deleted it and there is a story with Naruto paired up with Hanabi I think it was called Ice Princess of Konoha but that author doesn`t want to get off his good for nothing ass to even update the story and there is another Hanabi/Naruto story but we have to wait till the guy finishes boot camp sorry for rambling anyways please update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 16:01 CDT
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This is a really good story but please update soon I got to see who all he hooks up with and sorry for complainning but I still say 2 acer of land is still way to small maily when you said it is going to be a harem anyways please update soon
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Reviewed By: RandomCraziness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting...can't wait for the next update... great story!
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Reviewed By: Chaoswizkid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fanfiction, and hopefully will become a lemon epic (My profile has some other lemon epic names if you'd like to search for them and... 'study'). I'm really liking your creativity, I mean you just fucked over Sasuke like it was no big deal. That, and Naruto being like he is, a hot sister fox of Kyuubi that mates with Naruto (Though that's not 100% original, it's still a fairly new idea, and you probably thought of it yourself). If you need any help with your story, especially lemon advice, I'd love to help to boost this fic even higher on the ratings. Kudos to you for a great story so far, expecting to see more in the near future.
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Reviewed By: Fennec Fox Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really loved this story! Please update soon! I can't wait to read what happens!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 11:58 CDT
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I love the story and in my opinion on the lemon hell I thought it was better than any of the other lomens I read anways I cann`t wait till you update again but I will still say for Naruto to start a Clan wouldn`t he need more land tan just 2 acers and like I said I live on 2 acers of and it is small ok it is big enough for a pond but what you it has 2 lakes a small lake and a large lake so I think it would be better if Naruto had what 20 acer but 2 to small maybe if he is only going to have a really really small Clan then 2 acers is ok oh well please update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 03:09 CDT
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Please update soon and plus like I said in that e-mail I sent you that 2 Acers but anyways please UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 23:34 CDT
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That was a good chapter I cann`t wait to read more soplease update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 23:05 CDT
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At first I liked your story but now I love it because you had Kyuubi-Naruto remove That loser Sasuke`s bloodline so will Sasuke still be in your story and I was wondering what was Kakashi`s reaction finding out Naruto is alive and will you have Jiraiya in here and will you have Naruto learn how to do the Rasengan oh and with the pairrings I wish Shizune was in the pairring since you hardly ever see a story with that pairring anyways please update soon I love the story
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