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"School Days" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Title: "Hmm..."--_--
Reviewed By: NhaCa  On: June 01, 2008 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I personally think there's n e thang wrong w/ ur fic it's just one speaking error...on when a meets r in his room & she was answering why she forgave him u left an extra " on this..."No, I…" She trailed off, wondering. Why did she want to come here, anyway? To see if he was alright, sure, but she knew there had to be another reason in there somewhere…" tada that's ur only error

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