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"Inuyasha on the Maury Povich Show" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 13, 2007 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Woah.. Woah... Woah.. very original!! Love it!!
 Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 13, 2007 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
You should get a beta for this. Too short, too predictable, and the grammar/mechanics/spelling need major improvement. Too many run-on sentences, among other things. You could also add a commercial for the commercial break segment to make it a bit longer. And these shows have a lot more drama, so let them go a little nuts like on Dr. Phil or Jerry Springer. This seemed more like Oprah to me.

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