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| "The Journey of the Half-Immortal" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 05:38 CST
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Awesome chapter. I like how a lot of the lose ends have been tied up. As well as a skip in the time line of 20 years. Poor Koga and Sesshomaru for never being able to have offspring with Aniu. To bad her mother couldn't step in and fix that for her, seeing as she is a goddess after all. I have really enjoyed reading this story and await the next chapter. Thanks for sharing your awesome writing abilities.
| Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 21:14 CST
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Great update!!! I'm rather intrigued with the round about way of how Kagome asked Inuyasha to help her have children. That was kind of unexpected, but rather well put as well. I also like the trip of Aniu, Koga and Sesshomaru. I wouldn't have expected either of the guys willing to share a mate, but I like this kind of twist. What is her connection to Hakudoshi? Why would he be asking for help? Doesn't he realize that without Naraku's heart that he will also die, unlike Kagura who has her own heart. I'd like to see how this is going to end. If Aniu has children, how will they know which guy is the father? This is an awesome story and eagerly await the next chapter. I can definitely see the fight against Naraku with Kikyo, Koga, Aniu, Sesshomaru, and the Inuyasha group. That is definitely worth the wait, or a fluff scene between Inuyasha and Kagome or the trio again. Those are quite nice. Thanks again for this wonderful story. Keep up the great work.
| Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 13:24 CDT
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Great chapter!!! I like how you focused on her stomach and the baby. I hope that she doesn't lose it, although with the amount of damage she sustained it was possibly inevitable. This was a very awesome story. Thanks for the update! Keep up the great work.
| Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really come to enjoy your story of the 'Half-Immortal.' It is very original in content and makes it very interesting to the readers to where they are drawn into the story line. I like how you've depicted Aniu and her relationships between Sesshomaru and Koga. I greatly enjoy your story and wish you luck on the rest of the chapters. Thank you for the update and a very enjoyable story.
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