| "Dancing Elements" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is truely amazing... I normally hate everything to do with Harry Potter but this story is a real attention grabber!! Hope you update soon!! -HCDK
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Title: Dancing Elements
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ludifig On: May 05, 2008 08:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
how can you loose the chapters on your computer?!!! use the search tool.
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Reviewed By: Sakura Dimentia Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 22:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. I really like this story. I would like to be a character in this fic. I already have a name picked out. Trinity Elizabeth Asai If you have a profile i can look at I will of if you would prefer I can create one. I really like your story. I hope you update soon. Ja Sakura Maxwell-Minamino aka Eternity/Hitokiri Shi Kuroi
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Reviewed By: Griffyn On: October 26, 2007 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very well thought out story. The spelling and grammar are good as well as the creativity and originality. I really enjoy this story and hope you continue it. However the chapters seem rushed. So try to expand on them a little, add a little more detail slow the pace a little. There is no need for rushing the more you add the more there is to enjoy.
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Reviewed By: evalhanne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 02:29 CDT
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This story's interesting so far. I like how her appearance changed after mating with Sess, though he seems to be uncharacteristically nice. No big, your the author here and as long as he stays badass it's cool.
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