| ""Because She Told Me To!"" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Avada Kedavra On: September 15, 2011 10:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find myself Conflicted. Like many others i must say i loved how you kept all the characters so close to their original design as you did. I really hate it when people just "porno-ize" the characters that we have grown to like. But then i must confess myself disappointed. I know this is going to be completely contradictory to what i just said but. It seems that Clarie got let off a bit easy right? Yeah she's in the hospital, expelled etc. But her sexual Torture did not last that long. I know "revenge" was never Nevil's or Luna's Goals but...Damn it i just wanted to She that Bitch suffer for what she did. But aside from that it was a Really Great Original Masterpiece. If you were Ludwig Van Beethoven i'd call this your "9th Symhone" |
Reviewed By: prayOlade On: August 21, 2008 04:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Gasps* That was disturbing! A lot disturbing. But don't worry, the fic was great! I can kind of see Claire's point of view and reasoning and understand her, actually. I think I even like Claire, twisted as she is. You can make twisted characters seem so realistic! Also, Luna was in character, and so was Neville. I loved the way Luna and Nevile worked together. And Neville wasn't some cliche typical protagonist hero, but just his own self. This is just so weird and twisted, but is just brilliant!
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Title: Thank you.
Reviewed By: sargentaaron2004 On: November 13, 2007 04:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you, I don't know whether to thank your for the good fanfic, or to thank you fot the fact that you kept me up until 2:20 am reading the story in one big block, it was just so 'spell binding' (mind the pun) that I was addicted to it. Thank you, for your awesome story, I am now going to look for more stories by you.
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Reviewed By: AlphaBeta On: October 16, 2007 22:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story Roo the Roo, I can't wait for the sequil(sp?)!
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Reviewed By: AlphaBeta On: September 25, 2007 23:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Magnificent!
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Reviewed By: dantes_inferno [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 13:48 EDT
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i'm liking the new chapter, claire really is rather twisted, she brought it all on herself! can't wait fr the next chapter, i really want to know what neville does next!
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Reviewed By: Briana_D [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 11:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've said it before and i say it again....BRAVO!! I liked the way you presented us Claire's - rather twisted - point of view. Very nicely written, rather believable and totally in character. Nice work...will be having some het also? maybe neville-luna?~~~~Briana
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Reviewed By: dantes_inferno [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 10:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh! i want to know what unexpected thing happens!
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Title: weird but its good
Reviewed By: donkeykong4 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 18:12 EDT
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done very well
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Reviewed By: Briana_D [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 04:09 EDT
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WOW...random viewer is right, BRAVO!!!...Generally I'm not into femmeslash but I'm writing a fic which will have such scenes and so i opened this as research...and I like it! ::blushes:: Its well written, well characterised and the steaminess is there without it getting too sleazy...(not that that would have been bad either)... Who knew research could be soooooooo fun! please post soon!
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Reviewed By: Random reviewer On: August 26, 2007 20:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*mouth flaps but no sound comes out* That was.... *burst out laughing so hard tears stream down cheeks* Wow.... That was totally original and actually really in character for Luna.... Never seen a fan fic like this but BRAVO! That was truly excellent and not just cause I'm a perve....
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