| "Fever" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: LIL MAMA On: November 07, 2009 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT AT MAKING STORIES!!! you gonna add more to it right?.....
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Reviewed By: LILMAMA On: November 07, 2009 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was soooooooo good! please if yiou could.....um...can you... MAKE THIS INTO A STORY PLEASE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: decemberangel16 On: September 04, 2007 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story. i can't wait to read more. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 01:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice. Keep up the nice work. Would love for you to continue.
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Reviewed By: Yashie_And_Kags_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Fucking Cute :D Please Add More To It!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 07:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA the bathroom is a demon?? i love that!! and Inuyasha whispered 'i love you' CUTE!!
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Title: 8
Reviewed By: Jack's wench On: August 31, 2007 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
you've got talent. maby a little more describing details in the story, you started off great when you were describing them on the comfertor. and the bathroom being a "demon" was definatly original and funny. all in all not bad. Can't wait to see what else you've got!
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Reviewed By: EM On: August 31, 2007 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! SO cute!
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