| "unbreakableBOND" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2009 17:49 CDT
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loved this story it was so amzing. Glad that you killed valdermort off i hope harry n the baby is alright, id be sad if ether of them died. update soon.
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Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2009 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. =^.^= I have had bouts of depression from time to time so i know what its like. So when u get to feeling better i would love to read more of this.
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Title: Latin
Reviewed By: Sun's Rays Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I notice that you asked if your translation for "Blood love" was correct. It is in a way "Crour" is technically blood which flows from a wound, which works but the easier translation for blood is "sanguis." And also "Amo" is to love "Amor" is simply love. So you did very well on what you have, but just in case you want to change it there are the basic translations.So it is up to you what you use. I really love your story so far. I cannot wait to read more but I figured I would post this before I continued. Great job and I hope you continue to write!
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Reviewed By: addicted2u On: January 28, 2009 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just stumbled across your story and I couldn't stop reading! I like you're pairing of Malfoy and Harry the best. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! :-)
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Title: OhmiGod XD
Reviewed By: dantes_inferno [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 15:01 CST
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i loved this chapter, it made me laugh and smile stupidly at the cuteness of it all, can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Clover17 On: May 17, 2008 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo!! Please update!! I am really enjoying this fic. Ur take is one of the best so far.
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Reviewed By: dantes_inferno [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 10:52 CDT
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Oh Yay bonding time!!!!
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Reviewed By: MeefMonster and Kix On: April 17, 2008 12:49 CDT
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howdy..we both enjoy reading your story, so we figured we'd write a quick review/coment. Meefy says you should doulbe check your spelling/typo stuff and Kix thinks it's just ifne that we can read past them.. but anyhew, it's turning out to be a great story. progressing well.
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Reviewed By: dantes_inferno [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 12:47 CST
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love the new chapter again it is amazingly cute in places
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Reviewed By: maegerakawaii On: December 12, 2007 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. i dearly hope you update soon. I cant wait to find out what happens as school actually starts. Will people accept them or will they ridicule them? I must know. PLEASE update soon. Thank you!!!
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 20:43 CDT
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OoooOOoooo! I like this story! I think it's interesting how you have the bond originate from both of their Great-grandfathers. I wonder what Narcissa is gong to do... or why she's visiting. One thing that I really liked was the first chapter- how you had Petunia actually nice to Harry. Interesting take on it. Update soon. I want to know what happens next! ^_^
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Reviewed By: dantes_inferno [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm really enjoying what happening. the new chapter (4) is really good! the bit in the shed is fantastic can't wait to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: catherine! On: September 22, 2007 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awh! suckers... i like sirius in this! mmm.. choclate! lol update soon!!
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Reviewed By: evalhanne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so much fun to read! Do you think you can fix the italics tags, though? I can't wait to read more of this.
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Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 20:36 CDT
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LOL! Oh my... this is GOOD!! I can't wait for you to update!! Hurry up! No pressure though.. O_O ~Duchess
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