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| "Orenji no Taiyou" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: I cried On: December 02, 2008 12:24 CST
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You made me cry. Your story is really beautiful. I have never really agreed with homosexuality, and i still don't. But i have never been one to criticize them about it. I have no right to tell them how to live or to judge them. If anything, i have learned that I should judge myself first. I can understand how homosexual people feel. Its not like we choose who we are. I cannot change the fact that I'm black, though there are those that hate me for it. I'm humbled by your understanding, your revealing of the truth. (Not happy Kurama dying) Thank you.
| Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 23:29 CDT
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YEAH! I was totally going into this thinking that the rest of the story was going to be about people recovering from his death, and moving on, and accepting gays... Kick-ass if he survives! I loved that last sentence. Pulling a Youko!! Woot! Hopefully, he did pull a Youko. That would be cool. But, then again, that also means that he can never really come back to his life now - not that it is so great, but apparrantly people are coming around. So what, he tells Yusuke and that's it? Is Hiei helping him recover??? OMG - I like that idea now that I have thought of it! Please tell me Hiei is helping him! Maybe, in more than one way? :D Does Genkai guess what happened? I think she might have... I'm glad his mom is getting divorced, but I feel bad for young Shuichi. He is stuck with his dad. :( And I did catch your weather use - pathetic fallacy, I believe it is called. I liked how the snow melted when Shiori went through a realization. :D This is great. I can't wait for the last chapter. Keep up the good work. I will continue to check in!
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 10:37 CDT
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This is soo sad! Poor Suu-chan...:(
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 10:03 CDT
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Usually i hate the whole Kurama 'as a girl' thing, but this story is fresh and interesting! I can't wait to find out what happens! ^_^ Update soon as poss!
| Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 20:35 CDT
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ARGH!!!!!!!!! Please don't tell me that this is the end! There is supposed to be a happy ending and love and... I dont want Kurama to die!!! T_T I normally don't review, but this just left me hanging, and I felt I should let you know... This was very well written. Excellent skill. Very personal... *Sob* The only thing I really have to question is that he is an old demon... I guess everything I ever read of him was that he was a) sexually experienced, and b) a little bit smarter than he seemed to be acting here. So, what, Shuichi's (spelled wrong - sorry) personality took over in the mental sense? Did he become more Shuichi than Youko? Youko never really seemed to play a part in this besides a few random comments of being a thief. Why is that? I think it might have worked better if they hadn't been demons. And where the hell was Hiei?????? And what happened to his friend, damnit?? I want to know why the hell he didn't answer his phone! And it better be a damn good reasson. Anyways, I saw above that this was a work in progress, so I hope that that is true. I must congratulate you on a well written story representing the struggles gay people often go through. You had 'well-meaning' characters trying to fix him in various methods, you had people hiding their identities in fear. Good job. If nothing else, your story imparts the struggles gays and associates have in life. It is a very depressing outlook. Feel free and email me and stuff. Keep up the good work!
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