|"Maternal Expectation" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ]|
| Title: lol|
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 22:27 CDT
That was a cute ending! I loved it. I love how you write cute little chapters with so much meaning.
| Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 14:05 CDT|
Kaoru's pregnancy horomones are going to kill Kenshin! lol You're writing this one very well. I can't wait until you get to the birth...Kenshin better watch out! lol
| Title: :) poor kenshin|
Reviewed By: meetALEX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 10:04 CDT
Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
aaww... this is a nice thing to read. i have read a couple with the same theme but i still think there are a couple of differences per writer. good luck with writing the next chapters and thanks for sharing your story with us. ^_^ ja!
| Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 22:44 CDT|
This story is really cute. I hope that you continue with it. I'll be reading!