| "new life and new friends" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: silverstar/songstream On: June 18, 2008 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story. The ending was cute.It could have been a bit longer and more detailed but overall the plot was great.:)
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Reviewed By: Cookie nana On: March 01, 2008 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was an adorable story. i really like the end! write more!
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Reviewed By: Sukiko On: October 07, 2007 21:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm.. this was a cute, very short story, I kinda laughed when Kagome's mom said to InuYasha "Since it's so late, why don't you just sleep over?" even though he lives right next door.. haha! :P(I know my mom would never allow that, but whatever) :P I liked this story :) It was very cute! ^-^ Heheee
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