| "Sacrifice" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Ezpeanza On: November 02, 2002 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!! Please continue with it!! I love self-insertion fics as strange as it may sound. please keep writing. |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2002 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there!
Vegeta: Look onna, she running away from you and your madness. *chuckles*
ssjprincess: *ignores the aggrivating prince* Another interesting start to a story. :) So... I wonder what strange accurance took place to bring everyone to the DBZ world?
One more thing, I noticed the lack of Goku.... ummm...I was wondering...*spins around quickly, stops and reveals her change of clothes, dressed all in leather and holding a thin whip from her hands while smirking* Can I have him? I'd like to... teach him a few things. *chuckles*
Vegeta: O.O! Onna! I'm warning you, Stay. Away. From. Kakarott!
ssjprincess: O.o @ Vegeta* *looks at you* So... Can I have him? lol
Sorry. :) *smacks herself on the head* My brain is coming up with the goofiest things today. lol
Anyway, I like the story. :) |
Reviewed By: Princess Bloodfreeze On: June 25, 2002 13:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Now then...I'm reviewing both chapters and that's all I have to say. I like Grunion, can I have him? And can I have Trunks? You know he's my favorite person in the whole wide world and I really want to have him...so can I? |
