| "Mission" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Mission
Reviewed By: Dark_One Shadowphyre On: November 19, 2003 05:18 CST
Comment/Review:
::looks pained:: If I had tear ducts, I would cry. I sincerely hope you don't have ambitions to make your living by writing; while the plot was moderately original, its delivery was poorly structured and painful to wade through. And by the way, pilot 05's name is Chang Wufei.
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Reviewed By: Sailor Wind On: August 20, 2003 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that was a great story!!! The ending was a bit out of charecter but it was good. You should make a sequal where Heero purposses and they get married or something. Goood story! Ja'! |
Reviewed By: Neptune On: July 19, 2003 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story is great!! You did a great job and I would really like to see what happens to Serena and Heero! |
Reviewed By: angela On: June 14, 2003 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you've chosen a very paricular story line, where you still manage to keep everyone's character in place , exept serena's, who is no-longer clumsy, i should like to read more, a very fascinating story base, many compliments to your peice of art. |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2003 22:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh wow1 I'm very intrigued, pretty please write more? I want to see how the mission goes. Update soon! Happy writing! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: girldancer001 On: January 04, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!! THIS IS MY ALL TIME FAVORITE STORIE! but just a little side note, write one more chapter I think it would be cool |
Reviewed By: britt On: December 29, 2002 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a really good fic i absolutley loved it !!!!!!! hehehe
well se ya
britt |
Reviewed By: Kyrria On: October 07, 2002 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! PURTY!!! yay!! keep writing more fanfix!! |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2002 17:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwww... What a cute ending!!! I just wished it lasted longer... maybe a sequel...? I think many would love it; I know I would. ^_^
~Dipity |
Reviewed By: Joanne/Joey On: July 21, 2002 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Please write a sequel. Please I am begging you so please please please please please please please please please please Write a sequel. |
Reviewed By: Chibi Washu from Hell On: July 11, 2002 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Girl it's me I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! MORE!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story and I hope that the ending turns out good too. |
Reviewed By: Joanne/Joey On: July 06, 2002 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is so AWESOME!!!!!!! Please hurry up with the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it. ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter to be out. |
Reviewed By: myst On: June 28, 2002 13:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey this is really good. when are you going to come out w/ the next chapter? hurry up! me want more! |
