| "Angel of My Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: clapclapclap lol
Reviewed By: Eila On: July 28, 2010 05:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its very well done, very cute and romamtic as the genre said, I also like how you did sakura & syaoran's relationship, its like a mature relationship from CS, :D, but Meilin & Syaoran relationship arent much different from the series aswell . Keep writing, its very much fun to read, Ill be waitiiing :D
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Reviewed By: Evran On: February 10, 2010 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your plot line is extremely interesting and original, your writing however needs some work. The dialogue is very childish and unnatural sounding and you make many a lot of spelling and grammer mistakes. I would suggest you read everything outloud before posting. I know from experience it takes a while, but it really helps to eliminate spelling mistakes and unnatural diaglogue. Something may sound okay in your head, but when you hear it out loud or are reading it, it does not. Good luck and I hope to see an update soon.
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Reviewed By: kagome789 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 09:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good,plz continue
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Reviewed By: ss lover On: December 03, 2007 11:01 CST
Comment/Review:
a great story...i really enjoyed the story pls do keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: jenri619june [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 10:59 CST
Comment/Review:
cool nice story...pls do go on with it.
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Reviewed By: HiddenTruths [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 19:52 CST
Comment/Review:
That was amazing. Honestly, You're a really good writer! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Pinkie Chira On: October 20, 2007 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved every moment of reading it. superbly well written!!! =DDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!! twas so sweet, mushy and sappy.. write more!!! but put sakura as a real person!!! hahaha.. well done!
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Reviewed By: Blackk_Foxx_Firee On: October 02, 2007 17:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked it. It was cute. You could definitely see the "Wish" influence in the beginning, but you made it your own and you made it well!
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Reviewed By: Tsubasa Hime On: September 30, 2007 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. It's so romantic and cute. ^^ It even made me cry a little.
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Title: Michael Bulaich
Reviewed By: inukagluv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 13:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
That is so cute. I love it. Please make some more. Sakura and Syaoran forever.
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: sakura_801 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! I soooo loved this story. Of course I love almost anything with S & S (hehehe). You are a GREAT author, I hope you will write much more. I hope you are better from your cold too.
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