Reviewed By: downward spiral [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 22:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
well first off i like the fic and i like the idea with where you're going now i have to give some critism sorry i don't like doing it. some of your words were spelled wrong and even though many people do it not many like the script form of writing but i really like it so far so keep up the good stuff good writing
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