| "Sakura's Party" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Title: well?
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 17:09 CDT
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Was I right? Well was I? Update soon! I want to know.
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Reviewed By: Fennec Fox Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 06:24 CDT
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hahaha that was a great chapter!! Kiba's story was really good, too! Update soon!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: cake1794 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 21:58 CDT
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OMG I LOVED IT Lees story wuz funny hes like youthful man and women and there out of green spandex :D
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: September 09, 2008 15:59 CDT
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this story would be even better if you included more characters like gaara or somebody but this story is great keep up the great work
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Title: A pervert am I
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 19:25 CDT
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yes yes I am. We all are especialy that guy...where'd he go? Liked the chapter. Escpecialy naruto's about the ramen raiding radian...er...zombie. Can you tell us even an little bit about your next fic. PWEASE!!! Also Naruto and Kiba's arguement came from inuyasha. It was based off Koga and Inu arguing...Also at least I'm not as big a pervert as Miroku. *sees sango* *rub rub* Sango: pervert *turns and sees miroku* Miroku: Yes? Sango:*slaps him* Destenyne:*crawls away*
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: September 07, 2008 12:16 CDT
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great chapter great stories except lees his sucked balls lol anyway *looks at shikamaru* *whacks him with the staff in the head* i dont like him anyway good chapter cant wait for the next one
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Horible, horible, horible, is the exact opposite of this story(had you worried there for a second didn't I). This chap is just so good the only way to describe is by telling you the opposite of how good it is. Oh and btw once again you have made one minor spelling mistake in your authors note. One more thing, congrats on the A you got in biology.
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Title: this is from naratolover94
Reviewed By: cake1794 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 19:20 CDT
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yay that was great i feel special great story so far well bye :D
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: September 01, 2008 17:20 CDT
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i feel your pain sister SCHOOL SUCKS BALLS WORSE THEN SASUKE!!!! and i start school on thursday and im not happy T_T oh and just so u know im a guy
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Title: *being held back by Choji and Shino*
Reviewed By: Naruto Fan Club [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(you spelled Kawaii wrong....) LET ME AT HER! I WILL GET HER! NAUROT IS MIIIINE! *is knocked out by Sasuke*
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 19:31 CDT
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lol kewl chapter. i updated my story so check it out!
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to take your perfect 10 away from you all of a sudden but you made 1 spelling mistake in your a/n at the begining. Sorry but i'm just that critical. Other then that it was perfect. Oh and I have one suggestion to anyone who decides to reread the singoff chapters. Find a way to get the charachters songs to play as you read. What I did was I went to youtube found a video with the song played it then minimised and opened another box with the story on it. And as I listened to the music as I read it was like they where actually singing.
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Title: oops I forgot
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 15:33 CDT
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oh and by the way. I do read your AN and yes school is evil. EVIL!!! STILL NEED MOUTHWASH!!!
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Title: Buzz look and alien! Where! AHAHAHAA!!!
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay it was a tie! Thank you! I need to hug something! Also...imagining what it would be like to be kissed by Sasuke...GWAH!!!! OH MY GOD!!! OG MY GOD!!! EWW!!! SASUKE'S GAY!!! AND NOW RABBID FANGIRLS WANT TO TAKE THEIR ANGER OUT ON ME!!! NO THE FACE!!! and further more if he's gay then sakura will date naruto and hinata will be unhappy and...unless naruto is gay and sakura and hinata...awesome...anyway...NEED MOUTHWASH!!!
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: August 31, 2008 10:30 CDT
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great chapter though i wish hinata won herself *looks at lee* u scared the author die *grabs krystal's staff from starfox and beats the shit out of lee*
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