| "Sakura's Party" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, that was a cool story! I hope you think up another in the future!
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Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lvoe it, love it! I am sorry for not comming back but I got some bad news. I think my story is being put on hold for a litle longer. I still didn't get my computer fixed and well...you know. Sorry but your story is so funny!
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Reviewed By: Dante Son Of Sparda [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and yet again a great chapter the ending was a little different then i thought it would be but still good (RUN FOR YOUR LIFE SASUKE lol) like i said before looking forward to more of your work your the best......and on a side note GO GARRA KILL LEE HAHAHAHAHAHA o and if you have not already quessed i'm kind of insane or am i:) i'm kind of like if u put Garra's and Sasuke's minds together:) but enough about me again great chapter looking forward to your next story and i can't say it enough YOU ARE THE BEST
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't have much time s i'm gonna make it short and sweet. EXCELLENT, this story couldn't have ended better. I hope you make a sequal. Oh and one more thing i'm working on my own fic it's a kingdom hearts fic. I don't know if your into kh but I would be honored if you where to read and review.
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Reviewed By: cake1794 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 18:28 CDT
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lol RUNNN Sasuke Runnnnnn!!! lol good job wit the story
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Reviewed By: Fennec Fox Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 06:12 CDT
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Very awsome and hilarious chapter!!! I really enjoyed this story alot, and I apologize greatly about my story, but the next chapter will be out soon!!
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: October 26, 2008 21:44 CDT
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Very brilliant chapter and story you have very good creativity and imagination ill see you in the next story
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Title: RUN SASUKE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great ending. And poor Sasuk...hahahahahahahahahaha!!! I'm sorry but it's hard to feel bad for him. And me getting beet up with mr. wuffums is ironicle. The guy I was immitating gets beet up by a girl named shiki (shiba...) with a pig (stuffed animal) named mr. mew. Shiki: He's not a pig! He's a cat! MR. MEW THE CAT!!! *Shiki and Shiba beet Destenyne half to death*
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im gonna be perfecly honest. You dont have your touch back. What you have, is touch that rivals anything you have ever written thus far. In other words this chap was all of the following adjectives hilarious, awseome, and hilarious. I nearly crapped myself laughing, nearly.
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Title: koooollll =n__n=
Reviewed By: cake1794 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 14:53 CDT
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wow great so far you changed the story up a little kool keep up the youthfulness lol
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Title: Attention, all ramen-raiding radians!
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it Tsunade? Update soon! And no more groping for me. Back to petty theft. *Grabs Mr. Wuffums* The world's made up of numbers! I've been reverse-engineering my desired solution all along! And here it is! Drown in the sea of imaginary numbers! Any tree can drop an apple. I'll drop the freaking moon! CRUNCH! I'll add it to the heap! *Throws Mr. Wuffums onto scrap heap* Every inch of my work is flawlessly calculated. Look at the perfectly understated silhouette. How can you not see the beauty!? *Sakura knocks him out* 3.1415926535897932384626433832795028841971693993751058209749445923078164 062862089986280348253421170679821480865132823066470938446095! *Stands back up* But I was refactored, through the refinery sigil, into...this! This body, this power...all through the magic of Taboo psycho-animation! (Anyone guess who I'm immitating?) *Sakura attacks, Destenyne steps out of the way* Zetta slow!
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: October 14, 2008 19:12 CDT
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good chapter and the randomness *omochao appears* oh god help me lol anyways if i met you in real life i would hug you right now *hugs you anyways* cant wait till next chappie with more randomness *beats omochao and kakashi with a stick*
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Reviewed By: Dante Son Of Sparda [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 03:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter it was funny and i really liked it....and i have been meaning to say something before but i forgot hehehe so i will say it now i think u want overboard with making Lee and now Guy look retarded with the youth stuff but its still funny as hell that being said they are really retarded anyway great story looking forward to more of your work again you are the BEST
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: October 07, 2008 15:03 CDT
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Is the story done or no? if it is ill be sad :( i dont want this story to end so soon but i cant control your actions hope your next story will be just as good
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Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too many things happen when others fight. Oh, right that's your ideas. Hope you keep up the story.
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