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| "Vengeance Is A Dish Best Served With Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sorry, didn't get the email. There is a reason why I wrote what I did re: pairings. I love the,Yugioh, manga/anime, have for the last 5 years. That's why I choose to read/follow the fandom. Therefore weather a story is AU, OOC, Pre series, in series, post series, or crossover, it must somehow connect back to the fandom and somehow be explained. Yugi is the main character. Yami belongs to Yugi alone. There are no rivals,unless Yugi chooses. Seto, who's ,always, maintained the utmost,respect for "Yugi",(combined)and Yugi, his classmate. Seto does not believe in magik. The moment he does,he becomes a side story, that I don't bother with, such as S/J,B/R,M/M and Seto/Yami. Though, I do enjoy Yugi in other pairings Bakura/Yugi,Marik/Yugi,Malik/Yugi,Yami optional. If your story, does what I most despise, become a side story, half way in, I'm gone. What really gets me ticked off, is when an author, either does not list or change summary pairings. Sorry not interested. Good luck with this. I'm sure you're gonna have a few more reviews, from your fans and sympathizers. C ya!
| Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good so can't wait for more please update soon.
| Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 08:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 3. Well done! This chapter was already written, when I went on my little rant in the previous chapter. Needless to say it was unnecessary. Loved the way it turned out to be only "a test" on Seto's part. Oh, by the way, ummm, that threesome I mentioned, ah never mind. As for the rest of the story. I like where it's headed. And I guess it's safe to assume that the Bakuras and the Ishtars will be making an entrance,as well as the items. I'm going to go find out for myself. I still have one more chapter to read, before I have to go begging and waiting for updates.
| Reviewed By: tinkletimekelly On: December 04, 2007 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
You know what you're set up here for? A pretty awesome Seto/Yami/Yugi fic. By the looks of it, should this go Seto/Yami, I might no longer be reading this. When Yami picks anyone over Yugi, is when I lose interest. But when Kiaba accepts them both, well that's usually when a story normally hits my favorites list. So, because it's still early on, because I like your story idea and your style of writing(though you sometime get too descriptive,S'kay don't mind that) and because it has possibilities, I'll a least read what you have posted and see what your newer chapters bring. Most of this comment is a matter of opinion, mine that is. Please don't let it influence too much. After all it is your story. Keep writing. Later.
| Reviewed By: tinkletimekelly On: December 04, 2007 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay, I read the first two chapters, they were pretty good. And if you don't include any OCs (bah, I despise Mary Sue) or turn this into a Seto/Yami,or Seto/Joey (can't stand those pairing, won't read any fic, centered on them) I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your story. So far so good!
| Reviewed By: redconvoy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 17:43 CDT
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As the aliens in Robot Chicken say...DAMN IT DAMN IT DAMN IT!!!! I want more!!!! I like this story! Poor Yami! Poor Yugi! I hope they see each other soon! The tension is just too much ;D
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