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"VanDread - Halo" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ]
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 Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 22, 2008 19:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well that sure shot down my idea of using the MAC guns.
 Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 12, 2008 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I say they just blow it out of the sky with the MAC guns.
 Reviewed By: Blackop2  On: March 27, 2008 07:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this fic. Keep going. Here is an idea mix vandread with devil may cry.
 Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2008 16:53 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter update soon and hey I don't mind if you read some of my stories at least send me a comment.
 Title: Vandread Manga
Reviewed By: Dreadman mk.3  On: December 06, 2007 19:42 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yo, Freedom, have you read the Vandread Manga? It actually has alot of changes in it, and, Dita and Hibiki are a pairing. And, she doesnt call him "Mr.Alien" =P
 Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 31, 2007 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh I loved this story please update soon.
 Reviewed By: Ewojo  On: October 26, 2007 22:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
The story is good however elements of your gundread story got put into it. One example being When they are on the sand planet Hibiki calls his partner a gundam and it's not. Also after the mission they talk about Meia's reactions inside Freedom. I hope this doesn't dissuade you from continuing the story. Also are you gonna have the Chief be involved wih only one woman or multiple women?
 Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 26, 2007 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story but I want you to update Gundread seed I want to read the Kyo/Sara lemon.
 Title: BAD
Reviewed By: Kyuubi No Kitsune, Demon Lord  On: October 23, 2007 16:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
ASS!!!!!! Aw man, MC is such a BAMF (Bad-Ass-Mother-F*****)!!! I cant wait till they get to the sand planet =P Also, the so called "legendary ending" is not just for legendary; If you watch all the credits you see the same ending =)
 Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 17, 2007 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story is getting more interesting so please update soon.
 Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 08, 2007 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well Im pretty sure that Meia is one of those candidates to be paired with the master chief please update soon.
 Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 06, 2007 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hope you are planing to paired him with Meia or Jura or whatever character you created so you have my full support to continue writting.
 Reviewed By: Deathzealot [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 06, 2007 04:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice! Keep it coming... I think whatever enemy they face will be either some sort of Harvester 'bot that invades the ship when it comes to. Also are you turning Cortanna into a human being is a suprising move but a welcome one since I would not like seeing her die here. Also she may help smooth things over with the rest of the crew. I wonder how both John and Cortanna would react to Man vs Women war that these people are having. Heh! That would be fun... Anyways keep it coming...
 Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 05, 2007 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very interesting Im looking forward to read more
 Reviewed By: Deathzealot [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 04, 2007 02:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very, Very, Very Interesting. While I really want to play Halo 3 I do not have the money to buy both a 360 and the game itself so I just have to read about it. Though, I do love your SEED/Vandread Crossover and I guess I shall love this one as well. Though isn't John a little old to be paired with anyone. He is what in his early forties by the time of Halo 3 rolls around. Also how are going to explain Cortanna's Lifespan, since she is almost at the end of it by the end of Halo 3 if I am not mistaken. So she will die in this story? Also I agree having the Chief as the Nirvana's Combat Specialist would be a great idea. Also you did have those "Droids" In Gundread Second Stage on that planet, those could a good Ground Trooper for the Harvesters. Just a though anyways. Also I would love to see some characters from the Halo Universe showing up. Though that of course may not be possible. *sighs* Anyways keep it coming...
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