| "VanDread - Halo" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Title: another great story
Reviewed By: mocha joe On: March 29, 2009 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic story.I have to admit, when I first read the summary I was skeptical. Then I read your Gundread series. I was amazed by your talent. You took two different things and blended them perfectly. all I can say is bravo.
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Reviewed By: Deathzealot [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 00:18 CDT
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Interesting Chapter. Good to see that the crew from Oynx managed to get out of the damn thing. I can not help wondering what choas all these new Spartan's are going to bring to the vandread universe. I can see Parfait with the help of Dr. Halsey producing some armor for the Defense Teams and the Spartan IIIs. While it would not be as good as the Mjonir Armor it would be better then the SPI Armor the IIIs wear. Also I would like to point out that the Spartans did not call each other like you have in here. They called each other by name without the numbers. Anyhow a great chapter and I can not help wonder what shall happen in the next story. Keep it coming. PS. Heh! I just realized Fred now outranks the Chief. For he was promoted by... errr... I forget his name on top of my head. But Fred is now a Lieutenant JG. Anyhow keep it coming.
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Reviewed By: Godzilla2 On: February 03, 2009 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
TOtaly awsome, I m realy happy you finaly updated. I hope that you can foucus more on this story and Gundread, having to many stories under your belt at the same time can be heavy so I hope you take that in mind. But other than that, thanks for updateing. Kudos
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2008 19:45 CST
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Cortana is going to probably truamatize Paiway.
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Title: MISTLE TOE SCENE!
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 15:22 CDT
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I really think that John and Cortana should meet under the mistletoe. As sort of a step forward and something to start MC on the path to falling in love with Cortana.
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Reviewed By: Jarvisx51 On: August 05, 2008 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plot moves a little slow, but other than that, no complaints. it is a good story and I look forward to more MC asskickery. Mind I haven't played any H3 yet so please try to avoid too many more spoilers.
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Reviewed By: Godzilla2 On: May 23, 2008 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, I have read your fics, Gundred Seed, and this one too, and by far, you are one of the best FanFiction aouther I have EVER come across, and I can say that with confidence becuse I have read hundredss of them for the past seven years. You and your stuff is the best. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 19:56 CDT
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Well that sure shot down my idea of using the MAC guns.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I say they just blow it out of the sky with the MAC guns.
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Reviewed By: Blackop2 On: March 27, 2008 07:45 CDT
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I love this fic. Keep going. Here is an idea mix vandread with devil may cry.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter update soon and hey I don't mind if you read some of my stories at least send me a comment.
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Title: Vandread Manga
Reviewed By: Dreadman mk.3 On: December 06, 2007 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo, Freedom, have you read the Vandread Manga? It actually has alot of changes in it, and, Dita and Hibiki are a pairing. And, she doesnt call him "Mr.Alien" =P
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I loved this story please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ewojo On: October 26, 2007 22:41 CDT
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The story is good however elements of your gundread story got put into it. One example being When they are on the sand planet Hibiki calls his partner a gundam and it's not. Also after the mission they talk about Meia's reactions inside Freedom. I hope this doesn't dissuade you from continuing the story. Also are you gonna have the Chief be involved wih only one woman or multiple women?
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story but I want you to update Gundread seed I want to read the Kyo/Sara lemon.
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