| "Rurouni Kenshin- A Special Edition" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: heh
Reviewed By: Kanna de toro On: August 11, 2005 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe totaly hot lemon scene. Bit I do recomend a little rewriting and adding to it... Lemons are supposed to be long and detailed. But other wise very good. I am kind of bleh on the pairing. Its so... common.
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Reviewed By: GitonaX [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 17:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmmm..how naughty of them!!^_^Loved it!(though i would suggest more detail on the lemon....i am hentai!hahaha!)
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Reviewed By: AoiTsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 23:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh hohohohohohohoho what will sano and yahiko think? |
Reviewed By: Annoyed One On: June 12, 2003 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, Kenshin always says "That I Do" or "That I am" or whatever after a lot of sentences my amigo. And you should make them having sex longer and more detailed. And another thing, what about them having oral sex? ^_^ |
Reviewed By: alildevilgurl^_~ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 13:25 CST
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oh it was very good. please continue. i wanna see if yahiko an sano walk in on them or somethin. please continue! ill be waitin for the next chapter! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: N_Yah On: January 07, 2003 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
a- Even when explained, gratatious and unnesscisary Japanese (eg 'Busu' etc) is _very_ annoying. Use the english equivilants or not at all.
b- Try using a plot instead of a random idea next time.
c- This is very 'bare bones', rework it over completely, the lemon scene alone should be almost twice as long, not to mention the buildup.
d- Kenshin and Tomoe were married for at least half a year, they would have had sex a lot more than once.
All in all, this isn't a particually bad story (its probably the best Kenshin lemon here anyway _) with some re-writing it could almost be considered worth reading.
-N_Yah |
Reviewed By: tsuki-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's pretty good, but it's a little too occ(out of character), don't you think so? Kenshin doesn't smoke... and i'm sure that he wouldn't, you can see that in the anime and manga, have his evil way with her just like that, he would try to stop her, although he wants her as much as she does! things like that made me give the grade i did... taking those off you would surely get a 10 out of 10:) so don't worry be happy, you can do this:) I've read your reviews and i agree, you should continue, i would love to read more:) Anyway, i don't want you to think that i'm a flamer, because i'm being honest with you cause i think you need little to reach perfection:) so i'm leaving my e-mail, if you need anything, e-mail me, k?
Tsuki-sama(paula@holhos.com.br)
PS: WRITE MORE LEMONS, i'm on my hentai mood, sorry ^^;;; |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: November 20, 2002 10:39 CST
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You should finish it. I want to know what happens when the two guys come home. How do they explain themselves?
\\V//
^_^. Love and Peace
SHADY |
Reviewed By: Mushu+ On: July 27, 2002 22:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
C'mon everybody, write a review, it'll be fun. I don't care if you flame me. I'll just change what you think sucks. Hit me hard! |
