| "The Ties That Bond Us" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: more more more!
Reviewed By: AnimeCatGirl080291 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please wrtie more! why did you stop! oh and such a mean cliff hanger too. this is an amazing story please continue it!
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Reviewed By: WackieJackie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 11:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was good! Please update soon though. I need to know more about Jake and Bella. How is he going to deal with this?! He's so young! This is so good! I need MORE!
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Reviewed By: mspotts(not logged in) On: March 04, 2008 14:58 CST
Comment/Review:
omg, this is a really interesting plot!! Please update, im seriously hooked. xx
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Title: CONTINUE IT!
Reviewed By: DoggaNothlit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 07:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to update! This is very very VERY good! It's got me addicted and I need to know how Jacob reacts to it!
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Reviewed By: AnimeGirl214 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 09:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your story! PLease, oh, PLEASE, update soon! I wanna know what happens!
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Reviewed By: InuChicka07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it so far, being a Jake fan myself. You can do a lot of things with this story line, I hope you keep it going
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