| "The Gryffindor Misfit" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: ookami goddess of the sun
Reviewed By: ookami amaterasu On: June 07, 2008 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaasepleeeeeee eeeeeeeeeaspleasePLEASEupdate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !! Thank you in advance.
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Reviewed By: Briana_D [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is not a bad fic. I like Brittany's character and the way you've shown her to be real spunky and cool. On the flipside everyone is WAY OOC, so this feels a bit odd. Like it is a generic story and not particularly related to the Harry Potter series besides having the same names. BTW, is Brittany Harry's step sister? That's wat you're building upto right? Anyway, keep up the good work and try to keep some of the major character in character so that the story becomes even better. You'll probably hate me for my comments but I really think that there is a lot of potential in the story and your writing. Good luck! ~~~~~~~Briana
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Title: This story rocks.
Reviewed By: Setsu On: October 19, 2007 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanted to vote number 5, and i will use this review to vote number five for this fanfic. I hope that it wins. If not I am sure it will still be a funny idea. I think i know who Brittany's mother is. I hope you updaye soon.
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Title: AWSOME FIC
Reviewed By: Setsu On: October 17, 2007 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic. Hey Shadow heart, go to hell. This fanfic rocks. I hope she deletes your review. This fic totally rocks. My sister read this on ff.net and said it has lots of reviews and favorites. I decided to check it out here, and it is AWSOME. I hope you update soon. don't let that other reviewr get to you. I love this idea about a Song music video thing in it. Keep up the awsome work
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