| "Left Behind" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
| Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] |
Reviewed By: SummerRose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2012 19:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2009 03:56 EST
Comment/Review:
this is such a good story, please please please update it soon or if not then put it up for adoption so someone else cant write it.
|
Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 03:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
P.S. Botan rides an oar, not a broom. (Not a big deal, but some people will get picky about it.) If you ever get time, you might want to go back through it to correct some wording mistakes and typos, but I didn't think they detracted from the story. (And I would much rather see a NEW chapter! ^_^) This is very interesting! And I forgot to mention how much I enjoyed Yusuke's thoughts in this chapter. He realized how harsh he was being because he had been in that same situation and made it through. That was a really nice touch.
|
Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 03:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice! I really enjoyed the idea of Kagome's crown and what the different flowers in it stood for. The ending there, with Midoriko looking at her own crown was very poignant. She needs to help Kagome if SHE is ever to get into heaven, ne? I thought Kagome's mother's words to her rang especially true, -- asking her to just live longer than she did. That's certainly every mother's hope and prayer. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! ^_^
|
Reviewed By: demonfromhell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 23:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story!! I absolutely love it! I just wish it would move along just a hair quicker. Any who, great job! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!!
|
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 06:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love this please tell me we will all be seeing more soon. I so want to kick all the inu gangs asses though.
|
Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 17:36 EST
Comment/Review:
While the reunion between Kagome and her family was nice, it was the last part of the chapter that was the most significant and powerful. I loved Midoriko telling her how strong she is and how weak and selfish Kikyou had really been. And it was a brilliant touch to have her castigate herself, too, for being so afraid of death that she created the jewel that caused so much pain. I was so interested in your interpretation that she had meant for it to be a way to preserve her own life and purify the demons at the same time, but that it had instead trapped them with her so she was forced to continue fighting them. I really like that idea. And kudos for remembering to have Kuwabara pick up her tears! Way to keep your finger on the details!
|
Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 16:16 EST
Comment/Review:
*whistle*
|
Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 04:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It´s Midoriko not Mordiko. Change it please, there is nothing more annoying than misspelled names. It´s weird that you made Kagome so weak; even now, if you read the manga, Naraku can´t defeat her because of her unmatched willpower and thanks to Sesshoumaru, her spiritual powers were released and they are immense. But this is your story and I´m still reading it.
|
Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 17:20 EST
Comment/Review:
family
|
Title: KawaiiKekeChanNLI
Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 15:39 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow. I really love the spin you're taking with this. I could say inu and the others are OC, but it's your story, so it's your call!! You've got a really interesting way of writing! I like your style, it's original and quirky! Good luck with the next chap, and watch your spelling a litte! ^.^
|
Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 03:17 EST
Comment/Review:
What a beautiful beginning! Kagome deeply broken is a heart breaker. I'm very much looking forward to your updates. I hope they come soon.
|
Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 19:49 EST
Comment/Review:
Whew! What a terribly angsty chapter, -- full of pain and suffering for our favorite heroine. It's good to know that all of her false friends came to a bad end due to their greed, but I hope she will get to face them, with her new "family" surrounding her to support her. I can't wait to see what will happen now. She will be getting the jewel back. But, she's actually still dead? Interesting. I'll be looking forward to more. ^_^
|
Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 13:13 EST
Comment/Review:
Okay, the first chapter just continued the shock waves. Fabulous! I was stunned when you revealed that she had actually been HIT by Inuyasha, and that it most likely became a normal occurrence. I am still just reeling that the others would let that happen, and I know you've got some good story to tell here. It's so heartbreaking to see her so fragile. I LOVE the tears of power. Do you have a pairing in mind for her? Obviously, the girl needs someone to love her to help restore her feelings of self-worth. This is YOUR story, and you definitely seem to have a plan for it, so I wouldn't dream of trying to influence you, but I have to say, this looks like a fabulous set-up for Hiei/Kagome. The tears, and the fact that she isn't speaking, and he may be the only one who can communicate with her and find out the horrors of her past and her dreams and her fears, well, ... it just looks perfect to me. (Then again, my thoughts always seem to go to Hiei when it's Kagome. LOL!!) I really loved the way you had Koenma tell the guys about her. And I am SO enjoying the way you've used Botan in this so far. This is one of the most promising stories I've read in a long time, and I just can't wait to see what you have in store for us. It's going to be an angsty, drama-filled ride, but I'm hoping for some good, old-fashioned romance, too. I'm in!!
|
Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 13:03 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow! Just ... wow! The prologue is so powerful and compelling. This story is obviously going to keep me on the edge of my seat eith my heart in my throat. I can't wait to find out how all of this came about, -- how and why Sango, Miroku, and shippou turned on her. (We all know about Inuyasha. Feh!) This is a wonderful beginning and I can't wait to check out the first chapter!
|
| Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] |
