Title: For Chapter 2
Reviewed By: RisanF [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good, and with a clever, tongue-in-cheek writing style to boot. Molly Pearson comes across as really detestable, but if she makes me feel this way, than you're probably doing something right. Here's hoping that Troy can get past her and that Molly gets hers in this story. (although already I'm thinking Troy would be better off with Kathryn; she kind of kicks ass) Donovan is kind of funny; his very presence pokes fun at all those badass bishonen that keep on popping up in anime. The dialogue between Kendrick and Donovan is kind of ridiculous, with each boy trying their best to emulate Sephiroth/Seshoumaru/Aoshi/whoever. I just wonder why you chose to name the story MST? Perhaps it's a subtle reference to the popular fanfic mocking genre, since the tone of your story sort of mocks traditional 'fic tropes as well...?
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