| "Breathe (2 AM)" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Nit pickey
Reviewed By: Inch Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 07:43 CST
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"Good try. But Kaiba, can not hold the "King of Games" title, because he never won it. Yugi/Yami held the title. And Yugi won the title for himself by winning the dual sending Yami to the afterlife, which started this whole mess." Did yami/ yugi not get the title from winning duelist kingdom? Kaiba did admit thet Yugi was truly the King of games during the afterlife duel but that does not mean that he couldnt get the title back if he wanted to try. After Seto enjoys a challange. As for the last chapter Great interpretation as always. Enebtually Yugi would move on as Yami would have liked. Cant wait for your next fic. plz feed my imagination *hold out bowl for seconds*
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Sorry if it seems like I'm nit picking. Don't mean to. I really do like most of your insights of the characters, as well as your short and sweet style of writing. Though, I'm fond of all the Yugioh characters, Yugi happens to be "central" or my favorite. The series/manga is about him, not Yami. I think it's the way you had the Kiaba's try to dismiss him, or diminish his importance. See if you can convince me otherwise, please. Looking forward to your next chapter regardless. And thanks for writing
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 09:24 CST
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Good try. But Kaiba, can not hold the "King of Games" title, because he never won it. Yugi/Yami held the title. And Yugi won the title for himself by winning the dual sending Yami to the afterlife, which started this whole mess. So the only reason Kaiba has to miss the Pharaoh, is because of how it effects Yugi and his quest for said title. And the the way you have Yugi feeling now, there ain't going to be any duals, any time soon. Unless Yugi snaps out of his funk, there ain't a thing Kaiba can do about it, power, money are useless in this case
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Title: seto
Reviewed By: Inch Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 07:38 CST
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Nicely done one again a believeable piece of seto work (well for me at least) Cant wait for another point of view keep it up^.^ Inch
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 10:04 CST
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Good chapter. She seems to be taking it better than the others.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 10:02 CST
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Good chapter. Poor Jounouchi and Honda, they are losing themselves over this.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well writen little piece. Later.
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Title: YOUr back as good as ever
Reviewed By: Inch Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 08:11 CST
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It godd to see you havent died and you stil have your gift. Great indepth character anaylsis (albit short but sweet) if that makes scnce Well you understand my twisted logic Keep it up Oh and thanksa again for the fic (weber's law) I loved it
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 09:55 CST
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I hope Yugi's point of view is next. It would be great to see how he is handling this. I like the story.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Still, haven't explained how "Yugi never presented a challenge", when Yugi still stands as reigning "King of Games" a title he (KIaba) hasn't won back. And that Yugi, still holds, alone after winning, against Bakura and Yami, with his own deck, at the gates of the "after life". And Joey's best bud wasn't Yami it was Yugi. See a pattern here?
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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I liked both chapters right up until the end when Kiaba said/implied that Yugi was not a worthy opponent. Remember, Yugi is the one who sent the Pharaoh to the "after life" by besting him in a dual. Maybe that could be cleared up in the next chapter?
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Title: Very,very....uh...I cant find the word!
Reviewed By: Vanda On: October 24, 2007 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I found this very, very...dang, I still cant find the words. But dont worry, it's positive! ^_^ I liked it, it kinda...i dunno, connected with me somewhat? I cant explain...but it was really good. I could feel how the characters felt, and that's not what I get everyday from this site. What you wrote for the characters got to me, and I enjoyed it. Please write more! Im awaiting! ^_^ --- Vanda
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Reviewed By: RedConvoy the Writer On: October 24, 2007 04:52 CDT
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As usual, everyone is so concerned about Anzu's feelings, what about Yugi's? He was the one who was closest to the pharaoh in heart and soul? Is he in denial or just handling it better?
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