| "Book Three: Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: AnimalMageJess On: May 13, 2008 13:30 CDT
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I didn't die, promise! I just have a large family, and i am the oldest. I have been so busy! Well, I turn 13 in august, so I'm planning to post it on ff then. Jessica
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Reviewed By: avatargirl2008 On: May 13, 2008 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, I'm really impressed by this story. I really cant wait to see what happens next. keep up the good work. you should also post this on fanfiction(dot)net as well =)
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Reviewed By: Ellen K. On: November 30, 2007 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm here, as promised! You're right, it didn't flow quite as well, but it was still really good. I have to go, but I'll be back again later! Ellen K.
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Reviewed By: AnimalMage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 08:54 CST
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Hey there! I wasn't quite as sure about this chapter; it didn't seem to flow. What do you think? Jessica
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Reviewed By: AnimalMage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 22:29 CST
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Okay, so my internet has been down for a while, but it's back on now. I'll try and get the second and possibly third chapters posted this weekend, but my parents are calling me to get in bed so, bye! And, thanks for reviewing!
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Reviewed By: Cra-z4Avatar On: November 21, 2007 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found it very interesting and I am looking forward to any more you will write. It's alot more original than most of the crappy stuff I have read. Its creative and original and I wasn't skipping around because I was bored. I was actually reading with interest for once! Your a good writer! Ellen K. was right about not making Kesh the main character. But she will be very interesting to hear more about. Plz update ASAP! :)
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Reviewed By: Ellen K. On: October 26, 2007 15:52 CDT
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This is a good story, and I like it. I will definitely be commenting on future chapters, and by then I will no doubt be able to tell more about it by then. A few minor typos, but they don't detract from the quality of the story. If your keep giving your OC faults, and don't make her be the *star* of the story (which you seem to be doing well so far) then she'll be a good character. Update Soon! Ellen K.
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