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| "Odd Admiration Chapter 7" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Ashcat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 01:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Fantastic sex scene :) I love how it was quick and hot and both of them were totally into it. The temple hickey was hard to picture O_o and sounded odd but loved the rest of it
| Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 13:26 CDT
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-grinning like a loon- Well I'd say that makes up about oh.....half of what Iruka owes. -glutton for sex- But what a lovely down payment that was!! Little details like glass bottles are a nice touch. And I forget if I told you this before, but I love that you have Kenshin in this. Kenshin is one of my favorite characters so it makes me incredibly happy that he's in this. What another wonderful chapter, and yay for porn!!!! speaking of, i actually just reread tied with a bow and uh..crap, forgot the title but the one where ruka and rai are in the shower. loved them even more the second time ^^
| Reviewed By: Vescas On: October 26, 2007 08:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
porn for the morning!!! porn for teh morning!! *loves you* oh, good hotness, and it was just perfect and lovely XDDD
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