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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 12:14 CST
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someone who knows. Thank you. Mental/emotional breakdowns are extremely hard on people. I know what it is to be alone through one. I don't go through as many as I used to now that I'm regularly seeing a therapist that I trust. Thank you for writing this out.
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 10:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"The day I can't protect you is the day I die..." that was...WOW. I almost cried reading this..it was so...real.. nice work!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice story... really liked it... wondering if you'll have any one shots that may follow after this... just to see how kagome handles everything knowing that inuyasha knows all about it... good job though... great work...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 01:39 CDT
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that was so real. i have lived those feelings before. awesome portrayal. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Pariah [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 02:43 CDT
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I enjoyed this, and I'm really glad you took the time to write it. It was a wonderful potrayal of Kagome's character and what her life could be like under slightly altered circumstances. As a character study it's really effective, and I have to say, with as little as Inuyasha is actually in this fanfiction, you really captured him very well too. Simply the line - "The day I can't protect you is the day I die, Kagome" pretty much nailed his character for me (and gave me the warm fuzzies to boot). Kudos on a job well done!
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Reviewed By: darkeneddemoness On: October 29, 2007 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was one of the best stories ive ever read. ur an awsome writer.
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