| "Little From My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: mistress of calamity [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the premise of this story. It seems like it has a great deal of potential. There are a few spelling and grammar opportunities that are a bit distracting. I think if you fix those, this fic would be even better. Overall, it looks like you are off to a great start. I am excited to see the next chapters.
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Start. Very well written. Just information to keep me wanting more in the next chapter to find out what is happening ASAP. So on that note...PLEASE Hurry with the next chapter....LOL
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