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| "Harry Potter and the Ashes of Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Title: Ashes of Hope
Reviewed By: knightsbridge [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started this story on ff.net, and while I'm an avid H/G fan I DO see your reasoning behind what you will be doing here. who knows what you have planned in the end, yeah? I have never read a story like this one, and it's an amazing piece of work. Darian
| Reviewed By: Silviata [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 18:00 CDT
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Your story and what you've done with the characters is fascinating! I honestly hope that you finish this story, it's been a great pleasure to read. ^.^ And are you still looking for a beta reader? If you are I guess I'll volunteer for the job. :)
| Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply wonderful. You have done a great job. it's not your average story. Somehow i always knew Harry was made part of the family to easily. It was too cut and dried. I love how you twisted it, but i wonder about Ginny and Draco. Poor souls. Please, write more soon.
| Reviewed By: DPVS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue the story , it is one of the most heartbreaking stories I ever read . I'm just glad that I have all seven books at my disposal to assure myself This Did Not Happen .
| Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 18:16 CST
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love the story, keep it up.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 06:38 CST
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Hmmm, interesting. You probably posted the corrections on here all at once to get the ball rolling on responses and reviews (not a bad idea for a story either, it caught my eye) since mediaminer is a little slower on that stuff. Neh, the writing style is pretty decent, though the chapters are on teh short side (also making it easy to update frequently, yay!). I'll say somethign more whitty in a review once I have a good idea to suggest or point out in the story. Draco Malfoy is one of those things, what the hell is going on in his life, being a good little Death Eater? Or something else? The only other factor is who that other potions master was, a rival to Snape, or just someone he had to report on? Either way, this is starting to sound interesting, so keep updating here on mediaminer. SO now, Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: anterrian [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i see that you've added 15 chapters so far. YAY!!! does this mean you've decided not to post on ff.net anymore? anyway, can't wait till all chappies are posted, hopefully with a new one added. =)
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