| "Third Impressions" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 18:35 CDT
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Loved it. Thoug i have a question... they got married without telling any one?? WEird.ANd i know you said you would stop her with this one..but maybe could you do the wedding? Or how he got the rings or something. I think it would be awesome and fit well. Plus you write so incredible that even if its short it would be good anyway. =D
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2007 23:13 CST
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so they're already married and none of their friends were there? cool chapter, nice finish. i'm too tired to think of anything relevant or witty so please just pretend that i wrote something intelligent and i'll try to write a better review next time. ~thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 13:50 CST
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i had to do a bit of searching for the profile you spoke of in your a/n, specifically in fanfiction[dot]net. . . if you want reviews on each chapter you post you should post them a day apart or with some time between because if you post three chapters at one time, most people will read all three and review once... that's what i do. it's good that you are posting at more than one site, there are others for instance: destinysgateway.com + meijitales[dot]com + dotmoon[dot]net + fichaven[dot]net . . . all of the characters and the way you portray them are just so funny. the reasonings everything is amazingly humorous! ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 23:50 CST
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the movie night was cool! actually all of it was pretty spectacular and i loved the humor especially of the inner dialog. one thing you have to watch out for is the typos. i have a problem with 'reversal' and i mix up my left and right hands and the order of letters. seems you are almost as dyslexic as i am, or you type so fast as you think you end up a bit careless. if you did a quick read through or have someone else read through it for you (like a beta reader). i could do that for you if you have no one else... ~ a pleasure, ginny
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