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| "Stuffing the Turkey" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Youko's Dish [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 01:08 CST
Comment/Review:
that was *ahem* interesting *blush* :D
| Title: Awesome!!!!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE it! XD It was so good! I cant wait for your christmas one!
| Title: A great scene and a great change
Reviewed By: tigz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, it's hard to write a constructive review for a scene like this one. It was very enjoyable to read, and greatly deserves near-perfect marks, especially for something that just popped into one's head. Makes a change having Quatre as the subby slut, but I can see it in my mind's eye and I don't think I'll shift that image for a while. Also loved the characterisation of Heero, very believable in his speech and actions. I can understand why it wasn't, but I think it might have benefited from being split into two or three scenes; and if I absolutely have to pick something to criticise, then the pacing is ever so slightly jittery in one or two places - but frankly, that kind of adds to the scene. Thanks for sharing this with us all!
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