| "Heart From Another Universe" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Mina On: August 02, 2003 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like everything in here, except, i wish it is Ayeka that Ash likes, but don't take this personaly because i like to have my favorite person to get everyone's attention. |
Reviewed By: jupiter_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really great! I enjoyed it and I hope you continue soon! |
Reviewed By: DJ On: December 07, 2002 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS EXCELLENT! PLEASE, CONTINUE OR FINISH THIS FANFIC!! I REALLY LIKE TO SEE ON WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I hope Sasami and Ash stay together (I really hate it when Ash goes back to Misty. I really like to see Ash not run back to her.) KEEP IT UP!!! |
Reviewed By: DJ On: November 15, 2002 13:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Please, finish it! I really like to see on what happens next! This is good stuff! If you won't finish it, let someone else finish it! I really like to see Sasami and Ash get together, Sasami capturing Ash's heart and vice-versa! |
Reviewed By: DJ On: October 30, 2002 10:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty nice fanfic here! Write some more of this! I would like to see on how this turns out! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Guardian of the Jurai Princesses On: August 28, 2002 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very good job with the fanfic i loved it sasami and ash perfect!!!! |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 16:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
gotta write more soon plz!!!!
(its great) |
Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
The first chapter was sad. I'm a Misty/Ash fan. I liked chapter 2 very much, the end was funny. Please write more. I'll be waiting. Ash and Sasami doesn't sound bad. Though it's the first time I've ever heard of it. |
Reviewed By: Myst_Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cute fic. I always thought that Misty is alittle too good for him... She's a bitch.. pardom my language. (giggles) It seems that you and I paired up Ash with another female anime character. I paired him up with Hotaru Tomoe aka Sailor Saturn (from Sailor Moon)
As for betraying him, that was a unique twist... I just read too many Usagi (sailor moon) betrayal fics out there for crossovers.. Keep up the good work |
