| "The Pavee's: Where magic is still in the air." Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 21:02 CDT
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i guess an illiterate gypsy wouldn't know to complain against police brutality. one wonders why the youkai would want to kill the 'pure one'? understanding an alcoholic's reasoning as to the blame for how their lives are a wreck can never be their own i could see why she would be looking for her father-in-law as scape goat. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 03:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i was hoping for more chapters ^^ but im fallen in love with this story ^^
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 18:00 CST
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dear, you don't have to answer my questions or conjectures, i assume they will eventually be answered as the story progresses. but thank you for the insight. . . the boys don't seem to think things through, it's typical 'boy' behavior although on a grand scale and where are they going to hide a horse? . . sometimes interesting stories don't get any recognition, if you love doing things like writing then who cares if anyone reads as long as you're doing what you love. if you check the 'hits' instead of the reviews you may feel a wee bit more encouraged. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 14:01 CST
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well it is rather inconvenient to house a horse in an apartment... a wonder that he isn't a bit curious that she was interested in a book of myth and legend that has 'jewel' in the title. considering he's looking for a 'jewel' that she would possibly have direct access to from the horse (the horse was in her possession first). . . i like the relationship progression between yasha and kagome. ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 00:48 CST
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so now the horse is in an eighth floor apartment with two little kids and a drunk woman... kagome now has the jewel, does yasha still have the responsibility to find it, he thinks it's still with the horse. i feel for the downstairs neighbor when that horse relieves it's bladder. . . one thing, japanese don't pluralize by adding 's'. ex: there is one hanyou and there are many hanyou. . . good chapter. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I am soooooo loving this fic right now! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!! Please update!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 13:05 CST
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i now have some serious celtic music to buy and i thank you. now let me turn you on to a friend's music... myspace[dot]com/cathasaighmusic . . . i guess that yasha wouldn't recognize when someone's seriously attracted to him or a crush on him, the shy glances with blushes when she's caught looking is quite obvious. i take it the bauble on the horse's mane is the thing he's looking for. . . now that all of the pieces are in their places i can't wait for the game to start. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 20:35 CST
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after your introduction i decided to read this story with an irish brogue and it works quite well. even the japanese names sound right. cool story, nice adaptation in combining the legends of inuyasha with irish traveler folklore. ~ thank you, ginny
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