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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story... liked the additions in the end... good job... great work... until next time...
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Reviewed By: marja the fallen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 13:48 CST
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i really like your story. it made me cry because i feel the pain in it. it's a really good story
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 08:23 CST
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Intense chapter. Glad K finally got to get her feelings out, and IY had to listen. Very well handled, the discussion b/t them. Maybe the declaration of love was a little quick? but nice to hear all the same. Is this the end? If so, well done. Will be looking for the next from you.
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 04:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank goodness for happy endings. At least she did not die. Sad; but good story.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice happy ending... really liked it... liked how you kept it real in the end... where after inuyasha told kagome he loved her... she didn't jump and just accept it... he has a lot to make up for and prove to kagome... before she trusts him and his feelings... and she becomes well again... good job... great work... wonder how the other ending will be...
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 03:46 CST
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This is a very dark story; but I do hope you feel better. It would be nice to have someone drop in and save her as she is falling. Maybe Seeshomaru? He could nurse her back to life and health.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 03:22 CST
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Hi sweetie, hope you're okay. You're story is really pretty good. Heavy on the angst, so it's dark reading, and sometimes the effects of that are hard to review. Could you show IY's POV/feelings about all this? Is he as frantic as K's mom, or just brushing it off? Does he realize the tie between her behavior and his own? Will he do anything about it? Now that she's had a suicide attempt, will this finally open his eyes? Give us his side of the story, good or bad. It helps keep a story from being 'flat' and one dimensional. Is he going through such angst as well? Let us see it. By having no true 'bad guy' you force the reader to really get into the story and look at things from their perspective. It forces them to think (always a good thing, I believe). But of course, if he is a jerk in this, well, that's how it goes, but I'd like to see it. Show us!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 00:38 CST
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hope you will feel better soon... god bless and take care!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so kagome was taken to the hospital... and she might die... wonder what the others are thinking about with kagome in the hospital and dying... will kagome pull through and get better or just die... is there a pairing in the end... will it be inuyasha/kagome pairing in the end... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 04:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sad chapter... very sad and depressing... seems that kagome has reached her limit... and she went back home... at least her mom was there to find her... maybe it's best that she stay in the future for now... or maybe she needs to go to a doctor... definitely in the next chapter everyone will notice kagome's change now, right?... wonder what happens next... waiting for inuyasha to do something is hopeless i would think... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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so sad for kagome... in her condition she's about to just give up... emotionally & physically... no support whatsoever from anyone... and inuyasha isn't helping... with all those declarations to kikyo... seems that they take kagome for granted... wonder what happens when she really will be gone... everything is so depressing... when will it be kagome's turn to be happy... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 06:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... seems that kagome is slowly loosing it... wonder what it'll take kagome for inuyasha to be concerned about her... kinda surprised he hasn't spoken to her about it yet... he would usually be able to smell if something was wrong with kagome... wonder who will find her at the well... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 01:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... whatever is happening to kagome is getting quite confusing... now i'm not sure if whatever is going on with kagome is because of kagome... or someone else... things are just getting complicated... hope someone will help kagome soon... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 06:54 CST
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Hmmm, in the freezer, eh? Couldn't be our hanyou, could it? Of course, he hasn't been around lately, so maybe she is losing her mind. All the worries she has, it wouldn't be a surprise.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 03:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... does no one notice kagome during these times... can't they sense that something might be wrong with kagome... really feel bad for her... so far no one seems to care enough to ask her what's wrong... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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