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Title: oh you neeed to get a brain...
Reviewed By: The one and only... On: April 21, 2008 23:33 CDT
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ok you really suck, you won't write, you have 'Ookami' be a total damsel in distress and you all around are a dumb@$$, so delete your account and go away, you can't do anything, absolutely nothing you write is good!! I HOPE YOU DIE!!! >
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Reviewed By: U know this On: March 28, 2008 23:32 CDT
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Ok, where are you Ookami's been stuck saying 'WHAT THE!?!?!' for a loooong time now, so can you update, this year, or better yet sooner! 'Cuz your really ticking me off... >
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Title: >_______>
Reviewed By: Swift Foot On: February 05, 2008 23:48 CST
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*loks left* hmmm.....*looks right* mmh hmmm.....* thseems lagit enough, anyway you know me and i know you so i'll cut to the chase, this stuff it good, but you really seem to focous on Ookami in all of your 3 fics...wow i sound like and arse saying tha, but i'm mearly sugesting thta you wright something that DOESN'T HAVE ANYTHING AT ALL!!!! with Ookami...that is all...*jumps away*
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Reviewed By: Zero101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 17:14 CST
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Hey hey hey, you cut off the story! Meanie. >:l But anyways, great job. So is Ookami part of something REALLY big, what does fate have planned for her? Once again I really enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait until the next one!
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Title: >: )
Reviewed By: You know who On: January 17, 2008 10:48 CST
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You haven't updated to chapter 18 yet. You have 1 week to post the rest of the chapters or you WILL have your secret posted for all the world to see. YOu have been warned. Oh and i liked your 15th chapter! ^_^ Is nice! Oops...i think i just blew my cover... O___O
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Reviewed By: Zero101 :D On: January 16, 2008 11:07 CST
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Yay, she's staying with guys!!! So she really does enjoy hangning around them huh? That's a good thing because I got a little worried for a bit, and that Damon guy was a real creep. >:l But her dad stepped in and it's nice to see that he let's her make up her own decisions. But yeah, nice fic and I can't wait for her ruinion with the guys!!! :) Bye!
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Title: it isn't bullox!! ^_^
Reviewed By: Rose121 On: January 15, 2008 11:04 CST
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Wow, you went all out on this didn't you? I really like it. Even though i think your using your 'there's' incorrectly, i like it! I did notice that you changed styles through out the story. It's a good show of how your character changes. I love it verry much and hope you post more soon. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Frankie (form Canada) On: January 14, 2008 13:19 CST
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Hey! *nibbles on a cookie* Whats up? This thing was kewl!! With a capatal Creative!! So how did you think this up? Oh well, you work in mysterious ways (just like your fav. animal) Oh and when are you going to come up? I miss you! ;__; Hope to see you soon. Oh and for that person who is trying to black mail you, (Fuc* OFF!!) >____< L8erz! ^__^
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Title: XP
Reviewed By: you know who I am On: January 14, 2008 11:17 CST
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You really took your time to drag this out, didn't you? -__- WE KNOW YOU HAVE UP TO CHAPTER 18 WRITEN!! POST 'EM!!!! NOW!!!! Or i'll tell everyone here your biggest secret!! XD yuo know i would!!! SO POST 'EM!!! Also, very creative, she sounds just like you (hint hint) you do fall alot.... 9__9 yesh....just post the chapters
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Reviewed By: Zero 101 (Hi!) On: January 12, 2008 19:28 CST
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*claps hands* Very, very good. I'm very happy at knowing Ookami's past and trying to imagine Shaq hugging and Oompa Loopa IS odd! So she's leaving huh? Poor guys, they'll be crushed. -.- Can't wait until the next chapter. Later! :D
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Title: Whoops...
Reviewed By: Zero 101 (Hey!) ^-^ On: January 08, 2008 17:14 CST
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Ooops, it seems that you've managed to post the same chapter twice. Oh well, it happens to everyone. ^^; Very nice chapter, poor Captain beleives that he killed her. The German phyciatrist was too funny! Baku: You thought he was funny?! He was flat out annoying! XO Me: Yes, and how does that make you feeellll? >:) Baku: *throws his hands up* Gaaa, you frustrate me!!!! T__T++ Very nice chapter and I can't wait until the next one. Oh, and thanks for leaving me a reveiw on 'I Hate My Name' and your idea sounds great. I'll include it in my next chapter and of course give you props for it! Later! ^3^
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Title: Ummmm...
Reviewed By: Sayla On: January 08, 2008 07:48 CST
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Umm, you've posted a chapter twice.
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Reviewed By: Zero 101 (who has litterally just seen 'Sweeny Todd'!) On: January 03, 2008 18:16 CST
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Sorry for the late reveiw, nice chapters. The poor girl was sooo confused, not knowing where you came from must be a terrible thing. And I can't beleive CAPTAIN killed her!!! X( Whoops, it happens...Sometimes... I hope Kao Lynn can fix her. Oh, and I liked how you broke the tension in there, made me laugh and no, I used a barf bag and not the floor. Just letting you know that I used you advice. Very good chapters and I can't wait to see what happens next. Cheers! ^^
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Title: Here's that 2nd reveiw you wanted!!!!
Reviewed By: Zero101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 20:01 CST
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I got soooo caught up with the newest chapter that I forgot to compliment you older one. Ookami's nightmare sounded pretty horrifying, I mean imagine your friends killing you. I couldn't, guess I'll never see my friends the same way ever again. Hey, wait a second! Madnug is tricking her, oh no! I hope Ookami can see what this baddy is up to. :l
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Reviewed By: Zero 101 (Hey!) ^-^ On: December 18, 2007 18:38 CST
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Oh my God, Ookami totally dominated the Dark Axis in under five minutes! I liked Sazabi's comment 'you're lower than Zapper in this food chain', very funny! :) So will our gundam heros beable to rescue her? Can't wait until the next chapter!
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