| "Things we don't Know" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Nice!!
Reviewed By: Moonlight Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent work! Very creative. I liked the part where the Emo boy wonder, Sasuke, was chased down by his fangirls. Hah! Kiriari is a curious character. Who is she and why is she always cold? Is she some kind of vampire? I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please do continue this fan fiction!! It's very internesting. And also sorry that I haven't updated in such a long time, but I'm working on chapter nine right now, so thank you for your review! And also if you feel up to it, check out my new fan fiction, 'Two Sides of the Coin.' Great work and kept it up!!! Awesomeness...^^
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Reviewed By: kandyapple08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOHH!!!!!! plzplzplzplzplzplzpplzplzplzplzplzplzplz update sssssssoooooooooooonnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Oh Holy white thighs
Reviewed By: Kisei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo, -Claps- ;] From using text talk -scoff-inourstorysummary-scoff- To using everyday words on me. =] I give you kudos on that. You have a couple of misspelled words in there, but besides that. I enjoyed it. =]
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