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| "Boxers Or Briefs?" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: And I thought I wasn't going to like this...
Reviewed By: D-Reaper Originalle [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 10:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
In the beginning, I thought this was going to be a run-of-the-mill fluffy piece of crap. You started out with the typical opening for pansy fics-- the snow landing on Daisuke's eyelashes and everything had me worried. However, your fic was a pleasant surprise. I love cute little snippets like this, where you can take a peek into characters' 'normal lives', especially when there's yaoi sprinklings. I especially love how you've got Tai living with Yamato even though he's got a boyfriend, and everyone's ok with the setup. It makes me happy because it sounds like a situation I'd put them in; it's like you read my mind! I think I'm rambling now... In short, I was a little worried at first, but your fic turned out to be kind of awesome. It wasn't drawn out and full of useless filler and it didn't try too hard to be fluffy. It reminded me of a little 5-minute mini parody/alternate universe(Not a bad thing). Good job!
| Title: YAY FLUFFYNESS!!!!
Reviewed By: Magical Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 06:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Taici's eyes darkened, "Just me?" he asked, leaning closer to the smaller boy. He kissed Daisuke's forehead, then both of his cheeks, and finally the tip of his nose. "You don't want any video games?" Might want to fix his name here!!! But it was great I LOVED IT!!!
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