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| Reviewed By: JL On: August 04, 2012 14:32 EDT|
Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
THIS WAS AWESOME~!!!
| Reviewed By: KB On: June 23, 2009 02:19 EDT|
ACK! *head to desk* I soooo wanted this to be a long ass story of doomishness after I started reading
| Reviewed By: Lily_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 19:43 EST|
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
I seriously want to know what happens when the four of them meet up again. Hiei is obviously going to let Kags know exactly who's in charge, but what I want to know is how he manages to dominate her. I also would love to find out what happened to make Kags and Sango like that, and where this Asami comes into play. You think you'll continue this storyline?
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 05:36 EST|
Okay, just read it through again and it's still absolutely brilliant. Dang, but it would make an AWESOME longer fic. I loved the whole set-up with Koenma calling them in to check on the holy energy and the story of the avatar and the stolen sword. You really threw a red herring in there with the mention that she might be housing a neko, -- my first thought was Kirara, of course. ^_^ The feelings that they got from the shrine were beautifully-described. And I REALLY admire the genius of having Sango's hiraikotsu coupled with the kitsune's green flames. Niiiiice! You managed to tell so much in so few words. I was so intrigued by the idea that after Miroku's death, Sango had agreed to become an avatar for a female kitsune. And I couldn't help but snicker at Sango's appreciation of Kagome's beauty. That was too, too good. ^_^ The stolen sword's history and the way Kagome could use it so she wasn't affected by Sango's flames was great! And you gave us just enough to explain Kagome's speed and new prowess with her swords when her eyes turned pink from the demonic souls in the Shikon when she fought. Love it!! (Of course, I noticed that several years may have passed also, from the fact that Kurama's human family is gone. Oh, wait. You said that there was a young boy on the shrine grounds, though. Hmmm. Then again, Kagome may have lived through the 500 years separating the times.) Kurama's observances of the two females and their similarities to him and Hiei were so nicely done. I laughed out loud when Sango told Kag, "Looks like I'm going to get my hide whipped, and you're going to get yourself fucked, Kagome-chan." Heh heh! The way Hiei's thoughts ran during their little battle for dominance was played out just right. And I giggled at Kurama's thoughts that Hiei was probably fooling himself about what he would do when it was over. But, he didn't win!!! (Boy, do I want to see the re-match!! Woo hoo!) And you really hit all the right notes with Hiei's thoughts at the end about how if he took her as his mate, then technically, her power would be HIS, too. You are awesome, my friend! You've got a great grasp on their core personalities, and a fabulous imagination. I would love to have the whole story of Sango and Kagome written out, along with Hiei and Kurama's pursuit of these fascinating women. BUT, this is perfectly wonderful as it is. *sigh* Like I said, you leave the audience wanting more. Great work!!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 23:45 EST|
This was super-fantastically, splendiforously AWESOME!! I loved it!! I bow once again to your wonderful talent and the way you have with words. Your handle on these characters is spot-on and always insightful. You gave enough to have us panting for more, yet it was so utterly satisfying all on its own. *Sigh* THIS just makes me happy. I love your longer stories, but your one-shots have a special place in my heart as well. (Or 2-shots. *puppy eyes* LOL!!) Thanks so much for sharing this with us!! (I'll be reading this again later, and I'll actually comment on the STORY elements then. LOL!!)