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"The Contentious Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ]
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 Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 13, 2010 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, I'll say you're one heck of a good writer and knows how to keep people entertained with your fanfic cause you had me hooked. It ended in chapter 10 and I want you to update soon.
 Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 28, 2008 15:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think I'll drop more than a few words. ^^ Anywho, I really like how this is progressing, and I laughed out loud at a couple parts in the story. Like when Sakura and Itachi were in the tunnel thing, and she fell... XD You've done a wonderful job with keeping the characters IN character. So, thanks for the update, and hope you update soon!!
 Reviewed By: Magami [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 27, 2008 21:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay!! Chapter ten is finally up! I was scared you weren't going to continue the story after a short while! ^^ Great chapter, and very... Interesting. The writing style is absolutely stunning, and has me demanding more. Please update again soon.
 Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 26, 2008 13:48 CDT
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Gah! I absolutely LOVE how you portray Itachi in this fanfic. Sakura is so in character, you can hardly tell she's not with Team Kakashi anymore. I've never read a fanfic that showed Kisame in a way that I liked, and the way you describe him and the way he acts has got to be my favorite out of every fanfic I've ever read. Please update soon!!
 Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Naruto is my homie [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 09, 2008 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Definitely in my top three favorite Naruto fics. You're turning me into a Itachi/Sakura fan. Keep it up! This story is great!
 Reviewed By: Magami [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 25, 2008 20:10 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story and the way you have molded things just perfectly. Its a great story, to someone like me especially who, in any other case, does not like the pairing of Itachi/ Sakura. I really like this though, so I really think you should keep writing. Its REALLY amazing though, so keep it up! ^^
 Reviewed By: vampire_pandora [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 21, 2008 04:39 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
me again of course i love it. i can't wait to read more
 Reviewed By: fluffyearedinulvr2 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2008 20:32 CST
Comment/Review:
the lack of reviews for this story is depressing, but mediaminer tends to be pretty stingy when it comes to reviews for some reason. Anyways, the story is fabulous. The plotline is believable and the characterization is some of the best I've ever seen. It's so difficult trying to pull together such unlikely characters but you're doing it magnificently. Keep it up.
 Reviewed By: WittyWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 10, 2008 12:31 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!. It is one of the few that have caught my attention and kept it long enough for me to read through. The squabbling between Sakura and Kisame is just hilarious to read. It is very interesting and detailed, just what I look for in a good story, I cant what for the next chapter!! ^^
 Title: Loved It
Reviewed By: yaya32691 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 16, 2008 16:07 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well I've always loved your writeing I've read every singel ole of of your storys.I have to say that puting sakura and Itachi was a great idea I love storys about both of them. ps I know this story is going to be just as great as your other ones. :)
 Reviewed By: vampire_pandora [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 14, 2008 04:32 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Of Course i'm going to review. I like how you didn't just throw the characters into the story and force it. It's slow and painful like it should be.
 Reviewed By: vampire_pandora [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 08, 2008 02:19 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMg i love you i do. I can't wait to see what will happen next i mean she couldn't go forever without fighting them. I like that you are developing her and itachi. AHH i just love this story.
 Title: this is totally...WICKED!!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 02, 2008 16:07 CST
Comment/Review:
i really love this story! tobi is really funny to me! how did u know about the initiation of akatsuki? i've never read about it before... bu anyways, plz update soon! i want to know what happens to sakura when she wakes up!
 Reviewed By: vampire_pandora [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 01, 2008 23:43 CST
Comment/Review:
still love it.
 Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 29, 2007 04:54 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Seems like the fun is going to start now. I enjoyed how Sakura was able to beat Kisame in battle. Please update soon.
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