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| "After the Music Fades" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Irvin Z. Martinez On: March 22, 2008 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again...angst and I don't really mix together. The thing about this story is that you didn't have a lot of fluffiness to help keep the story going. As you know in my personal opinion fluff and intimacy help keep readers focused and coming back while just plain angst depresses them a repels them, though a few select like continue coming back despite depression. But anyway once again I was also somewhat confused by the Realm of Dreams and all of that but the main plot still prevailed. Great job!
| Reviewed By: Irvin Z. Martinez On: March 22, 2008 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
As you know I have yet to read the manga so I have no idea what you're talking about when you speak of all these powers and such. But either way your writing still comes across as very informing to the eye and very helpful to the mind when visualizing the events. Even when I don't understand half of the material used. It is simply that why I didn't find it very enjoyable....but I did find the banter between Lance and his Aredactyl cute.
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