| "Baby, Let's Just Run Away" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Yuki KIKI [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2002 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv it, just the right mixture of lemon n action ^^! Can't wait to see more :)) |
Reviewed By: Piccolodork On: July 17, 2002 19:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg! that was a great story, but that ending totaly sucked!!!! what happens! i meanm i wasnt expecting anything great, but u cant leave ppl hanging like that, u gotta do the where they do and what happens junk, or yea, rewrite the ending. i mean dont get me wrong, ur a super great author and i love ya and all, but.... ug... bad ending... fix it
other than that it was a super good fic,
~Me |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 23:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I SPENT THE LAST TWO DAYS READING THIS GREAT FIC AND NOW YOU JUST LEAVE IT RIGHT WHEN THERE ABOUT TO RUN AWAY?! *pouts and has big puppy dog eyes* plz *sniff,sniff* plz make a sequel. PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ *takes deep breath*PLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPZLPZL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ I MUST READ MORE OF THIS GREAT FIC |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle 7 On: July 08, 2002 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the fu--, ok well, at least it was a good story. |
Reviewed By: Me On: July 04, 2002 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW! this fic is totaly amazing! update quickly! U've got talet! and lots of it! dont waste any of it! keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang, I am so happy to finally see this again!! Oh happy day!!!! And by the way, thank you for reviewing!
But anyhow, poor Bulma, and Vegeta! Kami, he's just got to tell her now! |
Reviewed By: Silent Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 20:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Opps in a I meant to put The people are nicer at FF.net! -.-' |
Reviewed By: Silent Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great! I think people don't give you that many reviews here because a.) The people are nicer :) b.) You're able to see how many people viewed your story so they probably feel like it doesn't matter to leave reviews because you know there reading or c.) They don't have time. But I think your story is original and great and could you please write longer chapters! |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@HOTMAIL.COM On: July 02, 2002 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iceis is damn straight about that review. FF.Net does give more reviews. And your fic is definately off da chain!!!! I'm a writer there 2. My pens Princess Sha there.& I've seen a fanfic here that has like 75 reviews for like 11 chapters, that fic isn't as good as yours. Your's is WAY betta!!!!. So, can't wait 4 da next chappie& nice ending. Has me even more interested. |
Reviewed By: Iceis [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG ONLY 4 REVIEWS!!?!?!?!? You know what i dont know if you know this place or not but if you were to but this story in fanfiction.net i KNOW you would get over 100 hundred reviews for this story!!! Trust me im a big time writter for B/V romances there and i havent seen this story yet there but i put out my best story here and only got 3 reviews and i have 99 on fanfiction.net....and i only put out 3 of the 5 chapters i have for it here......its strange....but i REALLY HOPE you do put this there. Fanfiction.net isnt working at the moment but its going to be back up to normal speed in less then 2 weeks. Email me and i can give you details or something if you need help! I LOVE THIS story and i KNOW everyone else on fanfiction.net will to!!!!! This story is VERy original and i dont want to stop reading you would sure to be on my fav. list on fanfic.net if you did put it there!!! (and please do, hey more reviews!!! lol) : ) please email me though....whether it be to tell me about another chapter or to just talk or something!!! |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla On: July 01, 2002 19:56 CDT
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ive read this on ff.net, and i love it, keep putting up more chapters |
Reviewed By: chibionna On: July 01, 2002 04:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good fic you got here! I gave it an eight in originality cause i've seen the whole Bulma and Vegeta were raised together thing, or Vegeta finds Bulma and tries to keep her away from Frieza thing.I really do like your fic though. I hope that Vegeta does something real nasty to that Ricardo guy, he really makes me want to push his face in a toliet. It's probably because I'm such a big Veggie and Bulma fan, that and he just wants to get in to Bulma's panties. I can't wait for you to update.~chibionna |
Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg I luv it It's Realy Cute Wut ealse is to say I Abusataly Love it . . . Kewp on writeing it I luv wut u done wut Vegeta lolz he has a soft side and i love it when ppls bring it out in there Fic's Write more soon !!! |
Reviewed By: Shateera On: June 30, 2002 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I luv your story! It's great even though Vegeta is a lil OCC. And we all know Vegeta would neva wear Manly Step-Ups!lol. He's not that depressed ova his height.lol. I'm crazy, yes I know. But it's a fucked up world we live in.lol. JaRule "Never Again" lol. I luv that song!!!!! hehe. "Ghetto gurls." "We like hot boys." Okay. Enough of this. Can't wait 4 da next chappie!!!!!! peace & e-mail me or whateva. Really luvin yo story!!!! |
