| "Jade and Jaden" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Awww
Reviewed By: RO-bandkid [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww it was soooooo cute between Jaden and Xaiver, they were so cute together!!!!!!!
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Title: yay! i can reveiw again
Reviewed By: RO-bandkid [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, i can finally review again, my computer for some reason wouldn't let me....but anyway chapter 4 @.@ so confuzed with all the he's and the she's it was really confuzing....but other then that I'm so happy you updated!! it's really good!!! can't wait for an update. even if it's not important to you here it is anyway, where I live it's so SNoWIng right now and I L
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Title: Yay! Update!
Reviewed By: RO-bandkid [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You Updated! It was really really good! I enjoyed it alot! I love the fact that their dad is so much more caring then their mom. It's so sweet.
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Reviewed By: RO-bandkid [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 03:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww it's so cute and you have it set up really well, excited to read your next update.
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