| "Thousand Lies" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: sailoruniverse On: May 03, 2008 23:21 CDT
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just thought you like to know that chapter 3 and 4 are the same. Hope you will fix this soon so we can find out more.
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Reviewed By: iluvGeeWay4lif [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 15:13 CDT
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OMG
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... like kagome's character but she can only take so much, right?... they seem to be together for now... for how long will it last... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 10:21 CST
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I'm glad to find that you've posted your story here as well. I've greatly enjoyed reading this story and eagerly await the next chapter. I've also enjoyed a lot of your other stories, posted of FF.net, where I 1st became familiar with your works. Will you be posting more stories here, or just this one? Thanks again for this wonderful story and the opportunity to read your awesome works. I found this Interesting, he forsakes Kikyo for an heir with Kagome despite his love for Kikyo. I foresee a take of 'hell hath no fury like a woman scorned' plot twist. Will we find out who her previous love was, the one for whom she wrote the poem that Inuyasha read? I know it's not him, but can only imagine who it would be? Koga? Sesshomaru? *gasp* Hojo? Eagerly awaiting the next update. Thanks again for this wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: bmine4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its fasinating! please write more,its so unfair where you stoped it....
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 05:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... so that was how it all started... but in the present both kagome & inuyasha have a child with them... somewhere along the way something must have happened to kikyo... inuyasha & kagome consummated their marriage... and kagome gave birth to twins?... but things didn't work out and they separated since inuyasha needs an heir he kept the son while kagome took the daughter... just guessing here... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... can't wait for the next chapter... please and thank you! HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 19:10 CST
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interesting story... like it so far... still confusing since it's only the beginning... why is kagome a single parent... who is yuka's father... why is inuyasha a single parent... why is his son yuki saying his mother is dead... who is yuki's mother... how are they connected... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you! HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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